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Unborn Musings

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Unborn Musings


I dream of my mother's face In her arms a sweet embrace Murmured words I want to hear From her lips I hold so dear... I know nothing of men's wars Or the pain of closing doors I don't know the color of my skin But know the heart that dwells within..... Still innocent in my unborn ways I dream of living peaceful days Some love to hold me by the hand And a friend or two to understand... >center>

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  1. Date: 10/29/2012 12:28:00 PM
    The stillness in the midst of night. When answers come with silent light. A magic sence that disappears when no one's round that even hears. A dreamscape scene inside my head. A mist of clouds where nothings said.

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 7:03:00 PM
    This is really great! My hearty congratulations on your win my dear Barbara! hugs:)LG

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 12:13:00 PM
    WARM CONGRATS BG ON A SUPERB WRITE AND TOP NOTCH WIN LUV .. HOPE ALL IS GOING WELL ..

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 12:31:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in the "Unborn Babies Dream" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 11:53:00 AM
    Many congrats Barbara on winning the contest, "Unborn babies dream" by Linton. Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 8:34:00 PM
    BIG Congratulations on your win friend Barbara. Hugs! **Maria**

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 7:40:00 PM
    beautiful... love it. Lee

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 7:31:00 PM
    LADY, congratulations with your deep and wonderful win in THE SCRIBE'S "Unborn Babies Dream" contest. Have yourself a good night~ PD

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 6:00:00 PM
    I love this one Barbara. This should be such happy time. Congratulations on your win. Lvoe, Joyce

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 11:12:00 AM
    Congrats on your Victory! A child is blind to war, ethnicity, etc. A beautiful and peaceful write!

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 10:42:00 AM
    Lovely write Barbara! It's nice to dwell on the innocence of the unborn while it's there. Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 10:49:00 PM
    Simply beautiful Barbara. I read it a couple of times. It touched me so. All the best for the contest.

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 3:22:00 PM
    Cold enough. :) To answer your question first. Kind of an early chill. Too bad we can't all just stay in the womb. Where innocense lives in bliss. Wonderful poem Barbara.

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 3:15:00 PM
    This is a very lovely way to picture the unborn soul and his musings. Nicely done, Barbara.

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 9:26:00 AM
    what a beautiful write, Barbara. Congrats on your wins, my friend : ) Yes, Carreras used to sing here a lot with Domingo and Pavarotti - the Three Tenors. Is he your favourite? My favourites are Callas, and Gheorghiu and Alagna (would love to see G and A live in Opera sometime).

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 8:34:00 AM
    Barbara, wonderful..pd

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 7:41:00 AM
    great write Barbara,good luck in the contest