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Peacock

Green and golden vibrantly shines on soft red lines as summer dew is gentle blue The hues of the peacock feather in all weather fills one with love in gentle cove Silver blessings fall from above labour of love feathers unfold a bird of gold 10/10/12 By- Tahera Mannan Contest- Just A Minute!

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  1. Date: 12/13/2012 10:24:00 PM

    lovely done...nie write..........

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 6:23:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super placement in Nette's "Just A Minute" contest Tahera. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 5:40:00 AM

    congrads on your win Tahera..eid mobrook.

    Mannan Avatar Tahera Mannan Date: 10/30/2012 12:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Yas and Eid mubarak to you and yours too.
  1. Date: 10/28/2012 7:07:00 AM

    Tahera, you also tied in colors with a smooth flow--feathers unfold a bird of gold--love it!

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 8:30:00 PM

    I really enjoyed reading this. We have a small zoo here in Waterloo, really small. But we have some albino peacocks. It is almost sad, really, to see, as though they have been denied their purpose. Odd thought? Perhaps. Wonderful words you've smithed here. Congrats on your win, Smiles from Cyndi

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 11:29:00 AM

    u hv beautifully described a peacock...congrats on ur win....:))

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 9:40:00 AM

    I remember this gem!! Big congrats in the contest, sweetie.

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 3:56:00 AM

    Big congratulations once again Tahera, well done xx

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 9:28:00 PM

    Tahera, congratulations in Nette's "JUST A MINUTE!" contest.. wishing you well.. xox~PD

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 8:38:00 PM

    CONGRATS TAHERA ON A MAGNIFICENT WRITE AND WIN LUV .. AWESOME .

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 6:11:00 PM

    congrats on your win Tahera

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 10:18:00 AM

    Beautiful poem Tahera!Lovely read.

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 3:24:00 PM

    You nicely depicted the peacock with this little poem Tahera. I just love that exotic looking bird!! Good choice!

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 3:06:00 PM

    Tahera, this is a lovely poem - the air is filled with love. -Wish you luck in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 10:47:00 AM

    Another gem from you Tehera, this is so lovely,,,,,,,,,,,

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 9:20:00 AM

    yes, they are such beautiful birds and a beautiful write - Congrats on your wins, my friend : )

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 8:06:00 AM

    I think that the Peacock is a beautiful bird..I noticed on the internet that there a those that are of white coloring..Great write to honor them..Thanks for congrats on my win..Sara