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She

She says she's sad. She sings 
sad songs. Safe, scared, still 
sane, serious - she sculptures
statues.

She saw some scenes - she says
seemed sins. So she says. Satisfied
she sleeps...

10/09/2012
written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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  1. Date: 2/22/2013 1:49:00 PM

    Seems she had fun writing this, thank you for reading " I call her name " you have a great day Lucy ;}

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 9:34:00 PM

    Lucy, a lovely verse... deep.... staying away is good...pd

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 1:31:00 PM

    Wonderful form. Very enjoyed your work I have read today. Brilliant poetry. Luv n hugs Michael

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 3:27:00 PM

    ‡ She Seems And Sounds So Beautiful For Some Reason ? Tis A Sign Of A Gifted Poet To Create Such An Image In Breath !nd Life. Bringing To Light A Canvas Which Breathes. Love, Rachel ‡

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 8:49:00 PM

    hmmmmnnn....awesome write my friend, Lucilla. I love it. Thanks for sharing, your precious time reading my poem and wonderful comments. Love, Leonora

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 4:04:00 PM

    this is very interesting one! Like a mini bio of someone. Who is it, Lucilla?

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 2:56:00 PM

    BRAVO LUCY ON GREAT ALLITERATION IN THIS PASSIONATE PIECE .. BEST OF LUCK LUV ..

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 2:52:00 PM

    Interesting lines that you have penned..Enjoyed reading..I hope that it is not you sad..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 1:35:00 PM

    Stopping by your poetry list today to tell you thank you for your kind comments on my writing. Your comment was truly appreciated Lucilla. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 10:40:00 AM

    Oh this is clever poetry, very smart girl you are, a joy to read you Lucilla

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo Date: 10/10/2012 12:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Harry; I was just messing around with words. You'd be suprised what you can come up with. Lucy
  1. Date: 10/10/2012 3:25:00 AM

    Very good written, Lucilla - I like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo Date: 10/10/2012 12:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne Lise, I'm glad that you like it. lucy
  1. Date: 10/10/2012 12:25:00 AM

    Your title reminded me of a cheap B-picture from the sixties starring bombshell Ursula Andress. It is difficult to write a coherent poem with all the words starting with just one letter. You pulled the trick off rather well here.

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo Date: 10/10/2012 12:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Robert - you look very young, yet you talk about the 60's like you had lived back then.Thanks for reading. Lucy