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Beautiful Morning

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Below is the poem entitled Beautiful Morning which was written by poet Roy Keith. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Beautiful Morning

Whenever I day dream,
 and day dream I do,
 in my secret garden,
 I day dream of you.

 I day dream of you,
 in a faraway land;
 embracing me tight
 and holding my hand.

 Holding my hand,
 and touching my face.
 Just you and me,
 in this peaceful place.

 In this peaceful place
 a pristine river flows.
 Where the unicorns run,
 a breeze always blows.

 A breeze always blows
 and sings of a song;
 our love in a place
 where you're never gone.

 Where you're never gone
 is as it would seem,
 from dusk until dawn,
 whenever I day dream.

 And whenever I day dream,
 and day dream I do,
 in my secret garden,
 I day dream of you

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  1. Date: 10/10/2012 1:16:00 PM
    Thanks for commenting on my poem. I like the way you start each, new stanza with the last line of the preceding one. Your poem has a nice flow to it. The meter and rhyme pattern go hand in hand. A nice, compact poem!

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 8:28:00 PM
    Roy, I like the way you added great romance to your day dream. Even when your minds in wonder, it is full of passion. i like the secret garden image, it adds a special kick of beauty... xox~pd

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    Date: 10/12/2012 7:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    the romance an day dream is about you