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David Williams
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senryu 77
I held your hand… as the clock ticked fingers moved 9/10/2012
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Joann Grisetti
Date: 10/20/2012 8:38:00 PM
Very touching senryu. Love to see you back.
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 10/16/2012 3:56:00 PM
Thank you right back, and a good night, tooooo yooooou... I might sleep early as well, i have had a long day..nice senryu... . xox... TEX
Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 10/15/2012 10:57:00 PM
What a special creation with only ten little words. Your last line was genius! Saving this little gem to fav's. Mahalo
Shaz Cheesman
Date: 10/14/2012 10:52:00 PM
Intelligent and with lots of meaning David in just 3 lines - Hugs - Shaz
Michael J. Falotico
Date: 10/14/2012 12:08:00 PM
So short but a powerful 3 lines. Hope your wife and yourself are doing well my friend. Michael.
Owen Yeates
Date: 10/14/2012 4:44:00 AM
Hi David great senryu my friend, hope this comment finds both of you well, all the best owen
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 10/14/2012 4:12:00 AM
Hi David a very emotional write my friend, hope things are still on the up...xx
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/13/2012 9:02:00 PM
twined! Light & Love
Yesha Shah
Date: 10/13/2012 4:22:00 AM
David, a lovely touching write flowing with emotions. Hope things are better now with you both. Keep the strength going, enjoyed reading your work.
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/13/2012 1:34:00 AM
Hi, David. Glad you liked my style of tanka since I am so unsure with them. WE had QUITE the day, my friend. Viruses attacking both our computers at the same time. We were in a dither all night and our son in law finally came over and solved it. We were HOURS worrying . I just hate wasted fridays like that.
Arild Andresen Ertsland
Date: 10/12/2012 12:38:00 PM
I feel your words here,David.Emotional and so very real..Have a peaceful weekend my friend!Take Care,Arild
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/12/2012 11:35:00 AM
LOVE it, David. Soupmail for ya.
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 10/12/2012 10:10:00 AM
TOUCHING TENDERNESS SHOWS IN THESE PROFOUND LINES OF PURE EMOTION DAVID LUV ..
Anne Lise Andresen
Date: 10/11/2012 12:11:00 PM
Thoughtful words and very beautifully written David. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Wilma Neels
Date: 10/11/2012 11:46:00 AM
David, I just gotta love this.. You say so much with so few lines.. I am doing good thanks for asking. How are you keeping? Love Wilma
Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/11/2012 11:38:00 AM
I like this one with the play on words..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..I am glad that you enjoyed my last work..Sara
kash poet
Date: 10/11/2012 9:07:00 AM
An excellent Senryu full with emotion David.Love this.
kathryn collins
Date: 10/11/2012 9:05:00 AM
Dear David - this is so powerful David. Thinking of you and your wife as always. love, Kathy
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 10/10/2012 1:34:00 PM
Stopping by your poetry list today to tell you thank you for your kind comments on my writing. Your comment was truly appreciated David. Love, Carol
Joe Flach
Date: 10/10/2012 12:04:00 PM
Short, sweet and so very touching. Funny how so few words, pieced together well, can paint such a detailed and complete picture. I hope things are going as well as can be expected. You are a good man and a terrific poet. Joe
jack horne
Date: 10/10/2012 9:09:00 AM
Yes, I can well imagine this one, my friend. I hope things are going well now. Thanks very much - loved the contest : )
harry horsman
Date: 10/10/2012 8:02:00 AM
this so deep David, like Russell i feel touched by this...
Russell Sivey
Date: 10/9/2012 4:09:00 PM
Wow, this is a touching write my friend! I understand the deeper meaning withing this poem as well, very heartfelt David! I really enjoyed this pleasantly derived piece, Great Work!!
