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To Him Who I Hate -Round 2

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To Him Who I Hate -Round 2

The ring meant everything-
Oh wait… it was your moms.

The vow meant eternity-
Oh oops… it was Vegas we were drunk.

Your love meant sacrifice-
Oh right…you cheated many times.

I was your number one fan,
Oh wait...that was your hand!

*Dedicated to Him Who I Hate*

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  1. Date: 10/21/2012 3:08:00 PM
    Oh shizzle his hand was his number one fan. Very damaging to his self esteem. Very funny. Total knock out blow.

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 12:36:00 AM
    Don't let the thought of him last. Expunge him; he is a thing of the past.

    brandt Avatar monique brandt
    Date: 10/10/2012 12:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I know! You are right- why is it so much easier to put up a fight?
  1. Date: 10/9/2012 12:21:00 AM
    Ah! Good verse! only remember, if you hold on to the hate, he wins... Cynthia

    brandt Avatar monique brandt
    Date: 10/9/2012 1:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Great reminder Cynthia! I do appreciate the feedback and take it to heart. *Monique
  1. Date: 10/8/2012 11:10:00 PM
    : ) Forget him!

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 10:24:00 PM
    wow.... a powerful round...love it...pd