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  1. Date: 9/30/2013 3:18:00 PM

    You got balls...lmao... The commentary and the poem is good!

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 3:14:00 AM

    Ahhhh! You have a new fan! LOL! I think that John admires you. How and when did this romance start? : )

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 3:50:00 PM

    Fyi slaves did not bring black jesus to this country. Jesus was given to them by they that enslaved them. Why does everybody in your family have a degree but you?

    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner Date: 10/15/2012 6:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    By continuously targeting, slandering, and name-calling, there is an overall point that you are making about yourself.
    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner Date: 10/15/2012 6:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    John 'The Situation' Loving III, wot aren't you understanding here? Evidence for your conviction? Proving your point? You don't know wot I didn't or did do. I never did understand why you have been targeting me for such a long time. I dare to do many things, yes. Just because you believe something to be right, doesn't make it right. For instance, I am wrong a lot, yet take some pride in changing my ways and outlook.
    Situation Avatar The Situation Date: 10/15/2012 10:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I don't know you may. Want to as daddy or sis. After all they went to school. While you stayed at home and wrote your so called history and dared call it poetry. I'm glad that I have this to prove my point. You provided the evidence of my conviction. You.
    Puddifoot Avatar Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 10/14/2012 7:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    rigid belief systems are for those who have lost the ability to think for themselves, surrendered the individuality they were born with to the indoctrination of others - that's why you find entire families all subscribing to the same religion; it just goes to show the level of mental conditioning that is exerted on young, open minds...
    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner Date: 10/13/2012 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Making a fool of myself can be very fun at times. Again, your point is moot; falls flat on its ignorant face.
    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner Date: 10/13/2012 11:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wot isn't correct? This is a poem....for me it is correct. Remember, poetry is subjective.
    Situation Avatar The Situation Date: 10/13/2012 6:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    So you admit it isn't correct? And no chris I won't block you. I'll just let you keep on making a fool of yourself.
    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner Date: 10/12/2012 4:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And who said I don't have degrees? I am tired of the Academic vibe anyway. Are you slower than I first thought? Yes, the bible was forced upon the slaves. Think about the implications. This poem isn't about whose history or theology is correct or not; there is a deeper message if you were just willing to think outside of your own contempt for a change.
    Situation Avatar The Situation Date: 10/12/2012 3:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That poem is far below your poetic ability. Delete it.
  1. Date: 10/12/2012 8:51:00 AM

    you certainly tell it as it is, nothing but admiration for those that do that,,, to my fav i need to read this again and again!!!

    horsman Avatar harry horsman Date: 10/12/2012 8:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh this makes my heart so glad, sod the blue eyed Jesus, we were smitten with, as a youth..the populous must have been thick, to have endured such teachings, and i could go on and on !!!!!!!!
  1. Date: 10/11/2012 8:46:00 AM

    A historian and theologian you are not. T.S.

    Situation Avatar The Situation Date: 10/13/2012 6:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Chrisdom as thinking.
    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner Date: 10/12/2012 2:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your own theological thoughts revolve around the belief that a rapture is going to happen on December 21st, 2012, and you call me ignorant....just because your life sucks so badly, you want it to end, doesn't automatically constitute that a rapture is going to do it for you.
    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner Date: 10/12/2012 2:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And how exactly do you come up with your claims? Do you have anything to back-up your ignorant conviction? Or do you simply continue with your base-less name-calling and telling people wot they are and aren't. Wot exactly is your judgmental authority anyway? Where are your own credentials?
  1. Date: 10/8/2012 10:54:00 PM

    Intense, sweet, thought provoking in multiple ways! The image, of the ones they had to throw overboard, just burns deep inside of me like none other!...Moses too, he passed as the Pharoahs grandson!

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 10/17/2012 2:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I think anyone who acts brave behind a CPU is cowardly in all their actions! I got into it with the Bitchuation also! I rather not argue with any man I prefer to touch; I'm an hands on kind of guy!
    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner Date: 10/12/2012 10:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    John 'The Situation' Loving III, your truth is subjective when compared to my truth, and vice versa. It appears to be you who reeks of brain-wash and ignorance. Very badly too, I might add.
    Situation Avatar The Situation Date: 10/11/2012 8:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I think he should remove it before to many people that know the truth see it. It reeks of ignorance.
  1. Date: 10/8/2012 9:47:00 PM

    I love this poem, Chris. I'm putting it into my favs. It says so much, my favorites lines are, "But in the hearts of slaves, Yeshua remained a Black Jesus," Lovely poem, really. hugs, catie :)

    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner Date: 10/13/2012 11:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Duh! Of course I became angry. I am not going to hide that at all. If people want to laugh at someone who finally lashes out at your bullying ways, they can go ahead and laugh....that would only reinforce other aspects for me. I knew how you were slow, but I didn't think you were THAT stupid. Well, I learn something new every day.
    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner Date: 10/13/2012 11:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    John 'The Situation' Loving III -- again you prove your ignorance. You actually believe that after bullying me for years in a row, I wouldn't eventually get angry!? Didn't control my anger? I turned the other cheek for years. It is your insecurity that caused you to bully me for years, you big retard. I finally retaliated against you, is wot I did.
    Situation Avatar The Situation Date: 10/13/2012 6:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Chriss, your ranting has proved the worst of you. Your insecurity. It's all over the site. With the little help that I provided we gave soupers a view of of a vindictive lunatic. That cannot control his anger. I won't ever block it I'll just let who ever wants to laugh.
    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner Date: 10/12/2012 10:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    John Loving III, wot exactly are you getting? How do you even know wot I am, and wot I am not?
    Situation Avatar The Situation Date: 10/11/2012 8:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    People that arnt religious should'nt write about religion.