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Our Love

Head over heels for ... You
I wink once and you ...Smile
Saying you want me ...And
Our lips are locked as...My
Words seep from my ... Heart
Two bodies into one ... Melts
Written in (End Line Word) form This was brought to PoetrySoup by HG & Dane Ann Johnson I think it was in late 2009 or early 2010

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  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:16:00 PM

    This is a nice and wonderful poem.. a little more than romantic.....xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 8:27:00 AM

    ‡ I Love This Duel In Beauty's Canvas, My Sweet Beautiful Carol Brown. Nothing As Anothers Genuine Joyful Smile To Warm One's Loving Heart. To Pour Its Divine Vile Atop The Planet And Let There Be Rejoicing Amid These Streets. Beautiful As Beauty Is And Thank You For Loveliness' Precious Visit. Happy Halloween To Your Treasures. My Love, Rachel *

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 11:23:00 PM

    How lovely..this made me smile..J_L

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 3:25:00 PM

    Considerable thought went into this one. Very well done. It flows so well when written like this...

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 6:51:00 AM

    Such a blessing to hear from you! Take care and God bless!

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 6:51:00 AM

    ..short but sweet & uniquely done!..:)

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 12:06:00 PM

    Lovely poem well imaged. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 11:22:00 AM

    wow! seeing such a wonderful form of poetry here at your page Carol, loved it! excellent work

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 10:49:00 PM

    "I have sun-shine... standing beside me!" lol.... you are awesome...pd

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 2:37:00 PM

    This is a truly beautiful, simply beautiful write my friend! I really enjoyed this delightful poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 2:36:00 PM

    Yes, I remember it. thanks for showcasing it again. It was and IS a great form!!!

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 2:21:00 PM

    A oldie but a goodie I must call Dane! THANKS Carol. Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 1:09:00 PM

    this is sweet....xx...:)))

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 9:32:00 AM

    Nice

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 7:34:00 AM

    Very beautiful and serene,,, thanks for sharing Carol

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 7:18:00 AM

    i love the word usage. Nice poem

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 7:14:00 AM

    this is a really nice poem.Beautiful !

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 5:59:00 AM

    Beautiful on all levels... LOVE it.... hugs Michael

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 5:52:00 AM

    You write beautiful poetry, and my heart melts Carol. - Have a wonderful and happy new week. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)