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Mona Lisa--haiku
Mona Lisa--- studying her browless smile with a frown
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Ellie Daphne
Date: 11/16/2012 6:23:00 AM
If you have not had the privilege of seeing the painting live @ the Louvre in Pari???????(it IS&feels so different compared to watching it as a photo) it is a even more than a fantastic Haiku! LOVE it. :+) Ellie Daphne
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/11/2012 6:38:00 PM
I like the play on words.
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/25/2012 3:02:00 PM
yes, that Topaz poem was one of many challenges I used to try. Based on ten words. I keep forgetting you wanted a topic to get inspired by and I'm too rushed to even think of one right now. This weekend I will be h ome by my book and can give you some topics to maybe inspire you to write something!
Sandra Adams
Date: 10/17/2012 7:17:00 PM
it makes the reader think of the portrait, good job with this haiku, few words make the point!
Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 10/16/2012 11:28:00 AM
Kash...very interesting...Did you know that was (and has often been) a style of upper class women? Creative thought...My main thought when I saw it, was---- IT IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SMALL!!
Modupe Sefunmi
Date: 10/15/2012 5:00:00 AM
Lovely write Kash! I am usually fascinated with the way you write using this form.
harry horsman
Date: 10/10/2012 3:15:00 PM
i too have just written a mona lisa poem, i may post later... i like this Kash, makes me think....
Annalise Brigham
Date: 10/9/2012 11:05:00 AM
! Great Haiku, Kash! Perfect visualization of the painting! Always, Annalise
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 10/9/2012 9:20:00 AM
cool and clever Kash .. we will be trying to uncover what she was thinking for years to come .. winning wishes luv ..
Leonora Galinta
Date: 10/9/2012 1:34:00 AM
Very beautiful Haiku, Kash. I think Librans has sometimes same season of taste. LOL. Mona Lisa is also my subject in my Clerihew :)) So, how's your birthday been, Kash? I hope you enjoyed it. Thanks also for your greetings. Well, I hope this poem is for the contest 'coz I'm sure it will win!! Good luck always! love, leonora
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/8/2012 2:10:00 PM
This is AWESOME. Is it for any contest. wow, Kash. you are one of the best haiku writers on the site.
Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 10/8/2012 12:28:00 PM
Good work. Have a great day. Lucy
yasmin khan
Date: 10/8/2012 10:26:00 AM
enjoying this again, Karmonalisa.kashinalisa.
ilene bauer
Date: 10/8/2012 9:57:00 AM
nice one!
nette onclaud
Date: 10/8/2012 4:53:00 AM
ohh, that syterious smile so well depicted, kashi.. :)) grrreat 'ku..:) huggs!
Yesha Shah
Date: 10/8/2012 4:25:00 AM
Well this excellent ku is sure to make Da Vinci raise an eye brow too. Very well done Kash!
Mystic Rose
Date: 10/7/2012 7:10:00 PM
An artists eye and a poets heart, it makes for a great combination, and then there is Kash, here at soup, encompassing the two, I know you can't see me smile across the computer, but I am, just like the Mona Lisa, xxx vie
Russell Sivey
Date: 10/7/2012 4:49:00 PM
This is a fantastic write my friend, intriguing in the subject sense, great concept! I really enjoyed this fun poem, great idea! What a special piece, Great Work!!
kash poet
Date: 10/7/2012 4:24:00 PM
;-)
