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ANGEL THE DREAMER

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ANGEL THE DREAMER

                                                      My name is Angel the dreamer
                                            I’m still inside my beloved mother
                                  Three months to be exact
                        I’m so happy it’s the fact

              Mommy and Daddy love me
              For the whole world to see
              Because they plan my future
              That’s what I heard not sure

                         I can feel they are glad and excited
                                   To go to the doctor and be consulted
                                             Feels good to know they care
                                                       But surprises to see the doctor’s stare

                                                       With the instruments he hold
                                             I’m afraid and my body feels so cold
                                   Then my mother began to cry
                         I don’t know the reason why

             Suddenly I feel my body is in deep pain
             Ouch!! ahhhhh!! It hurts, what happen?
             Where are you Mommy? I am afraid!
             Please take care of me as what you said

                       Now I will not be born after all
                                 Shattered dreams, bless my soul
                                           Goodbye to all, its time for me to fly 
                                                      Up in the world of nowhere above the sky


10/8/12
For Scribe Marlon Linton's "Unborn Babies Dream" Contest
2nd Place Winner
By: Maria Paz Samelo

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  1. Date: 10/17/2012 7:16:00 PM
    MY HEARTY CONGRATULATION MY DEAR FRIEND, MARY!! I AM SO EXTREMELY HAPPY AND SO PROUD OF YOU! love, Norie

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 12:35:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in the "Unborn Babies Dream" contest Maria. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 11:58:00 AM
    Many congrats Maria on winning the contest, "Unborn babies dream" by Linton. Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 11:12:00 AM
    Congrad's on your winning write. Light & Love

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/15/2012 11:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks friend Deb :)
  1. Date: 10/15/2012 4:56:00 AM
    congrats on your win with this melancholy write Maria

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/15/2012 8:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks friend Joseph May :)
  1. Date: 10/14/2012 7:47:00 PM
    Maria, congratulations on your win. Lee

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/14/2012 9:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Lee, congrats to you too :)
  1. Date: 10/14/2012 7:32:00 PM
    MARIA, congratulations with your deep and wonderful win in THE SCRIBE'S "Unborn Babies Dream" contest. Have yourself a good night~ PD

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/14/2012 9:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks PD :) congrats to you too :)
  1. Date: 10/14/2012 4:12:00 PM
    CONGRATS MARIA ON AN ELEGANT WRITE AND WIN LUV ..

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/14/2012 9:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks friend Linda Marie :) congrats to you too
  1. Date: 10/14/2012 11:30:00 AM
    Congrats on your Victory! Shattering dreams through abortion! I love the emotion in this piece!

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/14/2012 9:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    so much thanks friend Marlon for placing me in your contest...Have a blessed day always! hugs!!
  1. Date: 10/13/2012 1:40:00 AM
    wow, what a creative piece this is. REally like how you did your entry. Awesome.

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/14/2012 9:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks friend Andrea :) good day!
  1. Date: 10/10/2012 11:35:00 PM
    This emotional write encompasses the rebirth odyssey very well Maria - the last two line communicate something fatal, but also immortal and redeeming for this lost corporeal opportunity - the tragic transition really made me feel somber - J.A.B. %

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/10/2012 11:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    i know how you feel friend Justin..I just remember the homily of our Priest last sunday about some information on Abortion worldwide so I wrote this poem...
  1. Date: 10/9/2012 1:54:00 AM
    Wow!! This is awesome and delightful my friend! i love it and I love the form. You're really creative! Good luck in the contest! warm hugs:) Leonora

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/9/2012 2:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks dear Leonora...have a nice day always!!
  1. Date: 10/7/2012 10:55:00 PM
    The configuration of your lines actually makes this easier to read. Everything here is very descriptive.

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/9/2012 2:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Robert for your comment
  1. Date: 10/7/2012 4:37:00 PM
    great write you got here Maria,,,, I know what it feels like to have miscarriages,

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 2:43:00 PM
    Moving poem. I like the way you staggered the lines to add to the impact of the words.

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/7/2012 10:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks friend Joan..have a nice day!
  1. Date: 10/7/2012 12:10:00 PM
    Your mother will always take care of you little angel - even in heaven - Luck in contest !!!! Very sweet and loving poem Maria - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/7/2012 12:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much my dear friend Anne Lise...have a blessed day always!!
  1. Date: 10/7/2012 12:03:00 PM
    very moving write, my friend. Congrats on your wins : )

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/7/2012 12:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks friend Jack...not yet a winner..still hoping (^_^)
  1. Date: 10/7/2012 11:34:00 AM
    Beautiful form and display here my friend. Michael

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/7/2012 12:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks friend Michael...good day!!