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Roses For PD

A journey southbound
There lives a Queen,not yet crowned
Knock on the door to her poetry Kingdom
Her servant leads me into this paradise of wisdom

This is where she rules
A warm and cozy place with dim lights
I ask with a voice of a fool`s:
"Will You except these roses,me dear Queen..?!?"
"..coz you are the nicest,wisest and best looking Queen I`ve ever seen! "

So here they are,my bouquet of red roses
She is pounded these days,red rose overdoses
My intuition tells me she likes it though
She is ready to be taken over to the Castle of Bordoux



A.Ertsland
February 12th 2012

* repost of the poem "Roses For PD" Hope you enjoy it:)

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  1. Date: 11/12/2012 6:35:00 AM

    ‡ Tis Sooo Soft Sweet As Beautiful, Sweet Precious Arild. Certain That Her Beauty Loved Thses Fragrant Roses In Heartful Red. Also, Thank You For Your Kind Visit And Romance ? Just Love. Happy Holidays. Love, Rachel *

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 5:12:00 PM

    Sweet poem! :D Always, Laura

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/10/2012 3:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Laura! its very nice to see you back on my pages again:-)
  1. Date: 11/5/2012 6:00:00 PM

    Yippee, i love this poem.. I'm making a copy, and taking it to my work, I will post it by my ordering window at work... some of my customers love reading what I post... ha ha..the ones whom understand where poetry comes from,,(the heart) always TEX

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/10/2012 3:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank (((you))) Tiger Tex:-) always from the heart!
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 9:10:00 AM

    Surely, P.D. would feel like a real queen after she read this. A very good one, Arild. I love the rhyming words..

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/10/2012 3:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Dinda-and (((yes))) a Queen she is:-)
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 7:04:00 AM

    very sweet dedication to our friend PD. I loved it! hope all is well with you and the family.. Have a great day Cory

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/10/2012 3:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for your lovely comment,Cory.All is well over here my friend:-)
  1. Date: 10/15/2012 8:34:00 AM

    a very sweet poem - hope anna lise doesn't get jealous, lol :)

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/15/2012 9:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    no jealousy around here,Susan:-) thanks for stopping by my friend;)
  1. Date: 10/14/2012 10:46:00 AM

    taking a bouquet myself,lol,great tribute to a great writer and poet,so sweet Arild

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/15/2012 9:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yeah,sure-have one on me.am sure she doesn`t mind at all:)
  1. Date: 10/11/2012 5:04:00 PM

    We gotta give the girl credit, she does keep life interesting and what would we do without her. Love the sentiment Arild you keep us smiling! Hugs, Lizzie

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/12/2012 3:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for stopping by,Liz:) i can see vacation has done you good!~hugs,arild
  1. Date: 10/11/2012 12:11:00 PM

    beautifully written poem friend Arild for PD :) so like it!! hugs!!

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/12/2012 3:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you friend Maria:)
  1. Date: 10/11/2012 8:43:00 AM

    a rosy day to you, arild..looking forward to your next piece... cheers!...still cold there?..:) huggs

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/12/2012 3:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ..red roses for you too,dear nette:-)
  1. Date: 10/11/2012 2:43:00 AM

    Ops, I've almost missed this so lovely and sweet poem of yours dedicated to our dear friend PD, Arild. I love it!!! Have a wonderful day always!!! love and hugs:) Leonora

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/12/2012 3:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for stopping by Galinta:) have a great day too! hugs and love~
  1. Date: 10/9/2012 11:12:00 AM

    She deserves them! I love the way you write, in a positive manner. This is some Dr. Feel Good ink!....lol about the new name you've branded me with; I like it! Take care Arild!

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/12/2012 3:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Poet Linton:-)
  1. Date: 10/9/2012 9:20:00 AM

    this is so sweet of you, arild... i thought you deleted some pomes as the last one i comented on was posted some time back.. how are your turkey muscles??.. :) huggs to you!..:)

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/9/2012 9:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for stopping by dear nette..not too well,got the flu and that sucks when one has asthma..:-(
  1. Date: 10/8/2012 1:36:00 PM

    Actually emailed Rebbecca with a temp yahoo acct to see what deal is about. Hey Arild she loves me!!! Who would of thought?? Lol. A couple of sexy pics and more ramblings. Crazy huh. How's the maid thing working out?? Lol. Later brother.

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/8/2012 2:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    what!?! she loves you too,Mike??? lol,the maid is up and about:-)
  1. Date: 10/7/2012 1:31:00 PM

    lovely tribute to PD, Arild : )

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/7/2012 2:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for stopping by,Jack:) appreciated very much!
  1. Date: 10/7/2012 11:45:00 AM

    I think I remember this one, Arild. It's a great one to repost for her big DAY.

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/7/2012 12:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yes indeed:) love how she motivates the soupers!thanks for stopping by Andrea;)
  1. Date: 10/7/2012 11:17:00 AM

    PeDee, you deserve this poem; you bring many smiles and happy thoughts to the soup. Love SandyIvy

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/7/2012 12:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for stopping by,Sandy:) congrats on your premium membership too!
  1. Date: 10/7/2012 11:09:00 AM

    Arlid, This is very nice of you. I'm actually enjoying my time here on the soup. I'm going down memory lane, as we speak, with all my favorite poems and poets. I am cleaning house;-) In there I'd seen the poem, roses for Pd, by you, and two other favorite poems by you. I deleted over 50 favorite poems, and 20 favorite poets. I think I will start this new birthday age by not going crazy. Well, I am on my way out, glad you are giving me another reason to keep this smile longer than my age. xox~pd

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/7/2012 11:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    glad you still liked the poem,pd:) i`ve been doing a bit of the memory lane stuff too lately..starting up the pen again,(hopefully,lol) keep smiling my friend!xox~Arild
  1. Date: 10/7/2012 11:03:00 AM

    Hello my friend and Brother. What a nice birthday wish for our Texas Beauty on her Birthday!! Hope your well and having a wonderful Sunday. Michael

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/7/2012 11:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for stopping by,brother:) just visited your latest write..man,you`re an amazing poet! Take Care,Arild
    A  Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/7/2012 11:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you, Michael...