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The Last Blast of Fire

Before the world 
       became home to the life we now 
know 
an inferno of fire surrounded it 
  The heat created life 
as the darkness 
    was finally shattered
  Little do they realize 
     how the begining 
 came about 
No Adam and Ever here 
  Just some atoms combining 
     the storybook is itself half closed
yet fortunately not completely forgotten

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  1. Date: 10/10/2012 12:39:00 PM

    Well said and written, Matthew - like it. Have a lovely afternoon. - oxox Anne-Lise :)- (IF ANY PRESSING THE BUTTON ..... Bye,bye.....)

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 10:38:00 AM

    yes i like this too, Matthew, told as it was...

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 9:43:00 AM

    Matthew; you have a great write here, educational too. People say that the world is coming to an end, but think it ends for those of us that die. Thanks for sharing. Lucy

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 2:02:00 AM

    I enjoyed this Matt. Great visuals. Mahalo

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 9:04:00 AM

    soup-mail

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 9:03:00 AM

    Hello, Matt... I am impressed with your poem. A true beginning , on how our life was mastered out of the fiery madness. I'm wondering how this story will end. However, you free-verse has been an honor reading on this wonderful day called my birthday,,,, xox~pd