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WILD BUTTERFLY

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WILD BUTTERFLY



butterfly swoops low

  landing on my watchful gaze

      red in nightfall's float

      ...I wing my last moonlight dream

         but then it flies in a rush




Tanka Written With Decent Pivot Contest
Sponsor: Chris D Aechtner
by: nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 10/14/2012 4:19:00 AM

    Big congrats from Spain xx

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 10:12:00 PM

    Lovely flowing tanka, well done Lee

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 11:51:00 PM

    great Tanka Friend Nette :) Congratulations!! :)

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 10:51:00 AM

    Oh yeah! This is grand!! Congrats, Nette!

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 7:55:00 AM

    Hey Nette Congrats on your Win with this beautiful Tanka.

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 5:25:00 AM

    Missed my calling...should have been a psychic...predicted this a sure winner...great job and congratulations, Nette! - Tim

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 3:58:00 AM

    Nette, Congrats on your great win with this beautiful Tanka! this is so lovely.

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 3:34:00 AM

    Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 12:21:00 AM

    Another awesome one from you and big congrats for your win. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 11:11:00 PM

    Beautiful Nette, Many congrats on this win.

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 11:02:00 PM

    This is lovely Nette! Love the image of the butterfly. Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 4:14:00 PM

    Always mysterious! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 12:42:00 PM

    A well earned congratulations on your win in Susan's "Single Tanka" contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 12:05:00 PM

    :-) Congratulations on your win, nette. X

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 12:30:00 PM

    lovely tanka. well penned nette.

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 4:59:00 PM

    Would love to have seen that butterfly,and in the moonlight no less!... What a great description, Nette...I continue in to be in awe of your talent! - Tim

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 4:05:00 PM

    Don't think that I have ever seen a red butterfly here..I would think that it is a beauty...Enjoyed reading your creative work..Yes, my poem about the hunter's bullet shot was spiritually based..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 12:27:00 PM

    wow, this is just beautiful, Nette. Congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 11:55:00 AM

    VERY lovely, Nette. AS always!! Is it for the seasonal contest?

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 11:26:00 AM

    Wow, the beauty of your write is phenomenal my friend! I truly love each and every word of this incredible poem Nette! I really enjoyed this delightful butterfly flying about showing its gorgeousness and displaying its graceful flight in the moonlight! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 10:47:00 AM

    Hi my name is Mr Goodluck..I have something very important to discuss with you..of course I would need your email adress cause I can`t discuss it in the open..bwahaha!:) Delightful images here dear nette..makes me happy to read it.re-your question:no,haven`t deleted poems:) why did you ask? Have a great new week coming up..hmm,salmons..what`s for dessert?:)Hugs and Love~Arild

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 10:40:00 AM

    Nette my luv!! What a beautiful Tanka!! Missed you. Hugs n luv Michael

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 9:45:00 AM

    Nice one Nette,,,,xox~pd

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 9:19:00 AM

    Hush she sees beauty in the wings of a butterfly, a poem to make me sigh, love, vie

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 8:52:00 AM

    A wonderful Tanka, Nette. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 8:21:00 AM

    Beautiful butterfly, nette, it will come again!! Jag

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 8:00:00 AM

    A butterfly comes to you with the compliments from me ...... lovely Nette. - Have a lovely Sunday. - xoxo love Anne-Lise :)