Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
Pinterest button
Comments Inbox

 
About This Poem

My Dripping Pen

When I had nothing left to give I gave you me...
Through all my faults I still stayed free..

While my pen drips words I couldn't say...
You can taste my passion in a silent way...

Hold your body close to the paper and listen...
It will reach out and touch your lips and glisten...

The juices pour down my pages and stain your fingers...
Leaving an impression of warmth and love that lingers...

Please Login to post a comment
Next>|Last
 
  1. Date: 11/5/2012 11:32:00 AM

    You seem pretty lucid for a guy who's drunk on love. Congrats on poetry win.

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 9:23:00 PM

    Michael, congratulations with your awesome win in the "Drunken Pen Round 2 " contest.....love the way you hold your pen. good night :-) xox PD

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 3:15:00 PM

    Awesome Michael,,,,,, cool that you won ,,,, have a great weekend.

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 4:46:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Joann's "Drunken Pen" contest Michael. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 3:41:00 AM

    I love this poem Michael..feel like reading it over and over again..congratulations on your win ..

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 12:54:00 AM

    good poem

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 1:28:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win, Michael. Su

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 2:33:00 PM

    Really worthwhile write Michael, pleased to have visited today.."

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 2:02:00 PM

    Your love of your pen and words shines through this one. Bravo. I agree with Sandra Adams... you can feel the passion.

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 12:27:00 PM

    beautiful write, one can feel the passion!

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 2:05:00 PM

    Stopping by your poetry list today to tell you thank you for your kind comments on my writing. Your comment was truly appreciated Michael. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 10:46:00 AM

    Michael, this is so unique, such passion, in fact i believe a classic...

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 10:37:00 AM

    love this romantic write, Michael

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 6:44:00 PM

    This is your best Michael!

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 9:21:00 AM

    nicely penned, michael... shine on..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 10:01:00 PM

    Michael, hi again... I think the only time silence is good , is when you are comfortable in the silence bliss-ering off the walls... your poem, is a place of beauty, created by your dripping pen..xox~pd

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 3:53:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your great work..Good rhyme in these couplets..Sometimes it is easier to pen our feelings than to try to say them outloud..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 3:08:00 PM

    Oozes passion. So well done! :) Tanya

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 9:08:00 AM

    SO SO EMOTIONAL AND PASSIONATE .. THESE LINES SPEAK TO MY SENSITIVE HEART AT THE DEPTH OF FEELING U CONVEY MICHAEL LUV ..MUCHO POWER IN THE PEN AND THE WORDS U WRITE MY W.K. ..JG IS NOW THINKING ON YOOUR COMMENT OF HUGS AND KISSES HEAD TO TOE PSUSING IN THE MIDDLE .. NO WONDER MY PRESSURE IS SO HIGH IN 50 DEGREE TEMPS .. BACK ST U LUV .. FEEL MY THOUGHTS???XOXO

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 8:44:00 AM

    "Hold your body close to the paper and listen..." Great concept here! UNIQUE AND VERY WELL WRITTEN, Jack

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 6:29:00 AM

    MJF you had to go there hey? The poor cabbies. One of them asked me on Saturday, since when do you work on a Saturday and where is your spectacles? Gosh they sure pick up on everything these guys. They look after me I tell you lol

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 5:45:00 AM

    Mr. Romance striking a cord again MJF!! Absolutely love it! love & hugs CTH

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 10:34:00 PM

    Michael, Wow! Scintillating and so romantic! This is fabulous! I loved it and will put in in my fav's. Mahalo

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 6:15:00 PM

    Wow, wonderful romantic words. Well done. .... Seren

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 2:05:00 PM

    beautiful and romantic write, Michael

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 1:38:00 PM

    So romantic and seductive thoughts Michael - Love it! - Hope the new week will be a lovely week. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 11:41:00 AM

    wow, so romantic. I love "taste my passion in a silent way" Is it for the drunken pen contest?

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 11:39:00 AM

    awesome write my friend Michael...thanks for sharing and thanks for dropping by...Good day always! cheers!! **Maria**

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 11:10:00 AM

    This is a simply beautiful and wondrous write my friend! I really enjoyed this creative and fully enlightening poem Michael! What powerful words you have spread out for all of us to feel within this incredible write! I love this delightful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 11:09:00 AM

    Happy Sunday,my brother across the sea!:) Wow! tons of passion and great images here.A true pleasure to read such excellent poetry Michael.Hope you`re well over there my friend.Have a great Sunday afternoon across the Soup bowl!

Next>|Last