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  1. Date: 12/15/2012 11:40:00 AM

    Hi David, I wanted to read this again...It envokes so much emotion in me. Having to watch my Dad pass..Congratulations on your win...Hugs, Holly

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 7:50:00 PM

    David, a deep image...i think I'm not gonna go near the corner... he he he.... love this haiku always~ TEX

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 3:42:00 AM

    Deep...very deep...death awaits but man wouldn't stop. Love your metaphor 'leaves' David... Angel

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 2:50:00 AM

    It's true and philosophical one. Thanks for your comment, my friend David. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 8:35:00 PM

    Emotion filled David. 'Just as in spring, rain showers. Only in autumn, Death flowers.' Hope things are going well for you my friend.Blessings

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 7:38:00 AM

    Without death there is no birth so the autumn of our years is beautifully presented here.

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 4:48:00 PM

    Very creative work..Got my full attention...Sara

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 11:51:00 AM

    You too feel the grave calling of fall. Good to see you (lol, umm, hear, no that's not it either) Good to see your posts again! Yep, that's it! :) Tanya

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 9:08:00 AM

    AMAZING VISUAL WITH STARTLING IMAGERY DAVID LUV .. THANKXX SO MUCH FOR HONORING MY ENTRY WITH A BIG WIN .. HOPE U ENJOYED ALL THE FINE ENTRIES .. AM SO HONORED AND HAPPY U R BACK WITH US ..

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 7:49:00 AM

    winter,great write David

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 11:27:00 PM

    Death is such a painful experience..especially when it is slow and suffering. My heart reaches out to you as you have with all your lovely comments and help with my poetry. And, thank you for helping me through my own suffering. xxoo Holly

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 11:50:00 AM

    An excellent haiku David, much pain penned..

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 12:02:00 PM

    Hi David great haiku very deep, best wishes my friend, have a good wek, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 8:59:00 AM

    great haiku David....best wishes....Joseph

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 5:12:00 AM

    Bold truth, very well displayed, David!

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 4:45:00 AM

    such profoundness David, the cycle of life, sometimes scary,

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 3:39:00 AM

    I like this very much David. They die in beauty. I pressed a beautiful red leaf between two plastic pieces with tape and it still looks as lovely as when I picked it up. I wanted a little token of Ireland to bring home with me.

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 3:36:00 PM

    Very vivid and true description of autumn David...trees getting ready to sleep through the winter and wake back up in the spring...so glad to see you back and I hope all is well - Tim

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 3:34:00 PM

    David, Nahhhh, I think I preferred haiku number 85...hahahha

    Williams Avatar David Williams Date: 10/8/2012 1:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ha ha ha , so do I....
  1. Date: 10/7/2012 2:05:00 PM

    A masterpiece of a poem,David.Hope you`re well,and have a peaceful week ahead my friend.Take Care,Arild

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 1:29:00 PM

    clever haiku, David. Hope all is going well

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 1:21:00 PM

    nice haiku friend David..have a blessed day always! (^_^)

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 12:14:00 PM

    Have you written 90 haiku poems David? - Deep meaning and well-written - Hope the new week will be a good week. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 10:59:00 AM

    This is really good, David. And one that is close to your heart.

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 10:55:00 AM

    This is a sad but very powerful Haiku my friend! Do you ever pick up the leaves and see how fragile they are, how delicate they are, how much they rely on you to keep them whole? Just a thought! What a spectacular poem David! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 10:04:00 AM

    Deep haiku David...much enjoyed!!

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 9:42:00 AM

    A wonderful haiku, David,,, soup-mail..pd

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 8:21:00 AM

    Just remember, those dying leaves feed the next seeds so they can grow and bloom.

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 7:32:00 AM

    Take heart that the waiting would be long enough, David!! Jag

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 7:06:00 AM

    hmmm Sad but true, nature evolving for the next season. We have Spring right now :D lots of blossom trees....Great Haiku David - Shaz

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