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Meat Market Robbery

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Meat Market Robbery

Bacon Taken By Andrea Dietrich for the Laconic Poetry Contest

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  1. Date: 12/2/2013 6:54:00 PM

    Short and salty! A very unique terse verse, Andrea! Good work! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you so much for the kind congrats on my poem!

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 5:06:00 PM

    haha can't get much more terse verse than this! congrats :)

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 10:23:00 AM

    Nice job Andrea, Congrats on your win. I hope that I can win on two words some day. By the way I think I'm the one that took the bacon.....Roger

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 1:57:00 PM

    Love it!! Can't be more laconic! Kudos

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 5:27:00 AM

    Congrats on the win, Andrea

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 3:53:00 PM

    Cute Andrea...I am still stuck on your "Grab it, rabbit" Pick pocket bunny footle. The baby loves it too. Haha!

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 7:21:00 AM

    Thanking you today for your comments on my writing Andrea. I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week. Love, Carol XXXX

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 12:54:00 AM

    A former co-worker of mine often said "Ain't nothin' shakin' but the bacon, and that's taken." If I robbed a meat market, I would not waste my effort stealing bacon. I would go for all the filet mignons and tenderloins they have in the place.

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 1:05:00 PM

    Just returning "two this one" Andrea; L O L.." Say I'll bet you play a mean game of "backgammon" 'Just coulden't help that one girl.." SMOKIN.....)

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 11:46:00 PM

    Oooooh Andrea! ...Well, I've never seen two words with so much meaning as these!

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 12:32:00 PM

    Well we all mistake things at one time or another so don't sweat the small stuff ha ha. love phyl

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 8:15:00 AM

    There is no one that can do these footles like you can AD---you're a "footling fool" lol

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 4:54:00 PM

    You're forsaken -Hi Andrea, I read somewhere your hubby hogs the puter and you are wildly busy. Makes one feel frantic when it goes on too long. Love your succinct statement here!

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 3:43:00 PM

    Ham scam, burger lary, cereal killer, five butterfinger discount. They've broadened out to a grocery store.

    Dietrich Avatar Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/10/2012 3:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 11:34:00 AM

    Awesome! Apparently I misunderstood it too and had to go unenter my poem! Back to the drawing board...

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 10:55:00 AM

    Did like this one (straight of the hoof ) Andrea I shall have to study footles more..' Hope you sre well Joe..)

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 7:21:00 AM

    Here you go again with the Footles!...You are the master!...I know you like movies...just posted a blog you might wanna' check out - Tim

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 12:49:00 PM

    It was me. Am adding tomato, bread and lettuce. Jiggers, the cops! Love, daver

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 11:37:00 AM

    loved the footle Andrea..

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 4:09:00 PM

    well i still like this, andrea,

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 1:02:00 PM

    LOL, just love this one, Andrea : )

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 11:27:00 AM

    Awesome footle!Best wishes for the contest,and have a smashing Sunday:) Hugs,Arild

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 11:07:00 AM

    ops.... i should also say thank you so much for your very inspiring comments in my first tanka poem. Good luck and best wishes for you big wins my dear friend!!!! hugs:)LG

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 10:42:00 AM

    Yeah, I'm not following what she meant either, but from what I gathered she wanted Two, Too, or To theme to be in the poem...but also two lines, but don't listen to me, I don't know for sure myself! But this is a great footle by the way my friend! Awesome Work!!

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 10:21:00 AM

    yeah good one Andrea...enjoyed. Hope you're having a lovely Sunday.

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 8:42:00 AM

    *.* Hahaha, Leave Unto Your Beautiful Sense Of Humour, To Bring About A Smile Within Our Hearts, My Dear Priceless Precious Sweet & Beautiful Andrea ˜ Now Who Took The Bacon ? Was It Rose Petal Annie, Again ? Hahaha, My Love, Tristen *.*

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 8:34:00 AM

    Shaken, awaken, Andrea, but love it!! Jag

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 8:20:00 AM

    Love your footle. I miss Brian. I think Deb does want specific forms of two lines, and also one of those words. Still, I don't read many good footles.

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 7:27:00 AM

    First "Footie" I ever did see except for the ones just below my ankles! Rots of ruck in Debbie's contest! Love ya... Jack xox

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 7:07:00 AM

    :) - Luck in contest Andrea. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)