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My own proverb

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My own proverb

“ Love is the greatest portion of our lives, although sex is hidden in love as a twinkling star”. Proverb by - Ravi Sathasivam

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  1. Date: 12/9/2012 9:54:00 AM

    You're right about love, nice flow...I like it...Thanks for commenting on my page...Hugs, Holly

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 11:13:00 AM

    .... .and so we try to star gaze as much as humanly possible. Nice proverb!! gwendolen

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 11:16:00 AM

    really enjoy this one so am seeing it again.

    Sathasivam Avatar Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/21/2012 11:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea
  1. Date: 10/13/2012 4:21:00 PM

    Interesting thoughts penned..Sara

    Sathasivam Avatar Ravi Sathasivam Date: 10/14/2012 1:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 10/11/2012 5:50:00 PM

    Never thought of it quite that way Ravi but who's to say it is not true. I like the thought and feel the beauty of stars makes your verse so real.

    Sathasivam Avatar Ravi Sathasivam Date: 10/14/2012 1:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 10/10/2012 2:57:00 PM

    i like this too Ravi....

    Sathasivam Avatar Ravi Sathasivam Date: 10/14/2012 1:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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    Sathasivam Avatar Ravi Sathasivam Date: 10/14/2012 1:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 10/6/2012 11:13:00 PM

    Very nice, Ravi!! If it's for Debs, I think she will love it.

    Sathasivam Avatar Ravi Sathasivam Date: 10/14/2012 1:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea