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IN THE GARDEN OF EDEN

Butterfly I saw
In the Garden of Eden
Celebrates its beauty
Colorful flowers to see
God’s gift for you and for me

The season of smile
Trees wave its leaves for a while
To show happiness
Air filled with so much freshness
Birds singing sweet lullaby

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  1. Date: 3/7/2013 11:13:00 AM

    Maria, an awesome win~Yours truly *SKAT

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 8:45:00 AM

    Maria, such peaceful thoughs--I can't wait for the flowers!

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 9:09:00 PM

    Maria, thank you very much for considering my 100 % nature contest..Congratulations in showing off Natures true after glow, always~ PD

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 1:57:00 AM

    What a lovely write vividly describing the fantastic view of an Eden Garden. Is this for the contest? Well, wish you all the best and good luck always!!! love/hugs:)) Leonora

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo Date: 10/9/2012 2:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yes, this is for the contest..just try learn how to write in tanka form..hehehehe thanks my friend for all your support..hugs always!
  1. Date: 10/7/2012 9:10:00 AM

    *.* Yesss, I Agree With The Lovely Ladies Below, My Dear Sweet Beautiful Maria ˜ Nice, Sweet, Beautiful ˜ My Love, Tristen *.*

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo Date: 10/7/2012 11:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much my dear friend Tristen..(^_^)
  1. Date: 10/7/2012 12:21:00 AM

    This is sweet....well done. BG

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo Date: 10/7/2012 8:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Barbara :)have a nice day!!
  1. Date: 10/6/2012 11:28:00 PM

    Hey, this is very nice. Glad I caught it here tonight.

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo Date: 10/7/2012 12:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks friend Andrea...Good day!! (^_^)