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My Love Song In Tankas

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My Love Song In Tankas

just in few moments as the dusk obscures the sky lids cover my eyes my mind begins to reckon the things I’ve done the whole day a flurry it was missing the sun in your eyes my heart in regrets didn’t sing you song last night or gave you right back sweet hugs now I sing my song but ice cream melts on its cone what else will I do to win back the love from you and make me smile and heart grows plead down so deeply asking you not to leave me I am so sorry this is the best melody be sung in my poetry I hope you can hear song being played in G-Clef lonely but lovely Tanka Song with love I sing hoping to ease all our pains
Written: Oct. 7, 2012 Second Place Winner Contest: Tanka-Sad Song Judged: 10/21/2012 Poet Sponsor: My Greatest Poet, Poet-Destroyer Fourth Place Winner Contest: Tanka me this, tanka me that, tanka me anypoem you want... Judged: 10/23/2012 Poet Sponsor: SKAT

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  1. Date: 4/21/2013 12:49:00 PM

    Hey Leonora, a very colorful and lively write. I love the way you used the word 'reckon' in the first stanza. I think it's a beautiful word and the way you used it was very unique.

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 5:15:00 PM

    Excellent Tanka series for your sad love song Galinta, so glad you visited me!

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 9:31:00 PM

    Good night,,, sis.... tomorrow a long day... xox~pd

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 8:49:00 PM

    Belated congrats on your well deserved win!

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 3:42:00 PM

    I see you have won with this set. It's so nice to see it on the winners' list, Leonora. You worked on this one. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 8:55:00 AM

    Congrats on your win in Sid's contest Leo...wonderful write!!!

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 5:45:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in ~SKAT~'s "TANKA ME" contest Leonora. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 3:41:00 AM

    CONGRATS LEONORA ON SWEET SUCCESS FOR THIS TREMENDOUS WRITE AND WIN DEAR FRIEND LUV ..

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 2:10:00 AM

    congratulations my dear friend on your win...God bless you always!!! mwuah!! (^_^)

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 7:09:00 PM

    HI MY SWEET SISIE-POOH LEO.... , congratulations with your "Tanka me this, Tanka me that, Tanka me any poem you want :-) LOL.... what a title.. Love it and enjoyed stopping by all my sisters tanka winners... good night... LUV~PD

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 2:29:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in Skat's contest, Leonora!! Ruben

    Galinta Avatar Leonora Galinta Date: 10/23/2012 2:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Ruben and to all here!
  1. Date: 10/23/2012 2:13:00 PM

    LEONORA, Congrats on your win' luv * Siddy

    Galinta Avatar Leonora Galinta Date: 10/23/2012 2:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much Siddy!
  1. Date: 10/22/2012 3:45:00 PM

    well, lookie there. a BIG win for you and you worked hard on this one! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 11:39:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D."s "Tanka~sad song" Leonora. Love, Carol XXXX

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 11:20:00 AM

    wonderful stuff leonora ,congratulations xx

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 9:18:00 AM

    big congratulations dear friend Norie for you win. I really like it. a very talented Lady. cheers to you!!! hugs!! (^_^)

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 8:53:00 AM

    Great tanka Leonora...many congrats!!!

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 8:04:00 AM

    Great win Leonora !

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 7:14:00 AM

    congrats on your win Leonora :)

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 3:49:00 PM

    CONGRATS LEONORA FOR TOPPING THE LIST AGAIN WITH SWEET SUCCESS LUV ..

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 1:44:00 PM

    just beautiful Leonora, congrats on your win

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 1:10:00 PM

    congratulations on your win. (your 4th one only has 4 lines)

    Grisetti Avatar Joann Grisetti Date: 10/21/2012 6:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for commenting on my David. I have always liked that poem.
  1. Date: 10/21/2012 12:10:00 PM

    What a heartfelt song in your verse !! Congrats on your win !!!

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 11:48:00 AM

    Hi Leo, sisie-pooh, , congratulations with your to be or not to be tanka poem in my contest... take care of yourself' I'll be around for another 3 hours...LOL... :-) always~PD

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 9:44:00 PM

    Leonora, I hope this is for my contest... you did good with your tanka's... i feel the song, dropping in my soul... . Thank you for this awesome group of tanka's. Goodnight :-)~ PD

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 11:42:00 AM

    Hurry and write some more!

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 10:45:00 AM

    This is very pretty. And it gives the melancholy mood that she asked for, Leonora! Sad and sweet this is!!

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 9:01:00 AM

    *.* Tis A Very Beautiful Love Song, My Dear Sweet Beautiful Leonora ˜ One Can Feel Its Sincere & Tender Words As Velvet Strings, Playing Upon Love's Heart ˜ My Love, Tristen *.*

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 9:34:00 PM

    wow!! superb write my dear friend..good luck in the contest..I'm sure i will be a winner! (^_^) Good day!!

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 9:09:00 PM

    Words of love to melt the heart. Lovely entry for the tanka contest. Mahalo for your kind comment.

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