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About This Poem

ache


A heart so lonesome
Hurting with wounds that cut deep
Lacerating soul
Emotions tearing inside
Bruising the spirit's essence.



A sad tanka for PrincessD.

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  1. A Avatar
    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 12/5/2012 2:16:00 PM
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    I will sing you to sleep........Butterfly in the sky I can go twice as high Take a look It's in a book A Reading Rainbow I can go anywhere Friends to know And ways to grow A Reading Rainbow I can be anything Take a look It's in a book A Reading Rainbow A Reading Rainbow Butterfly in the sky I can go twice as high Take a look It's in a book A Reading Rainbow I can go anywhere Friends to know And ways to grow A Reading Rainbow
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 10/23/2012 8:30:00 AM
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    My hearty congratulations on your grand win my dear Yasmin! hugs:) LG
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    Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 10/22/2012 7:18:00 PM
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    You got to the point; that's really how She must have felt. Thanks for sharing,Yasmin. And congratulations for your 1st win; you deserve it. Love, Hanitra
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 10/22/2012 3:41:00 PM
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    big congrats to your NUMBER ONE win. LUv, andrea
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 10/22/2012 11:37:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win in P.D."s "Tanka~sad song" Yasmin. Love, Carol XXXX
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 10/22/2012 11:16:00 AM
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    Big congrats here Yasmin xx
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    Jonas L. Rozario
    Date: 10/22/2012 8:45:00 AM
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    Congrats on your 1st place win Yasmin...great tanka!!!
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    Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/22/2012 8:05:00 AM
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    I can feel every words you said...big big congratulations on your win friend Yasmin :)
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    Modupe Sefunmi
    Date: 10/22/2012 8:02:00 AM
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    Congrats on your win!
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    craig cornish
    Date: 10/22/2012 7:55:00 AM
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    Yasmin very touching and beautifully written, congrats
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    Black Eyed Susan
    Date: 10/22/2012 7:09:00 AM
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    Congrats on your win! so sad...
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 10/21/2012 9:03:00 PM
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    Yasminovah...u wrote about me here...tapped right into my heart...Bravo for being at the top of the podium...love this poem with its complete transparency!! :) gwendolen
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 10/21/2012 3:44:00 PM
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    CONGRATS YASMIN ON AN EXCITING FIRST PLACE WIN FOR ACHE LUV ..
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    Francine Roberts
    Date: 10/21/2012 1:40:00 PM
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    congrats on your first place win Yasmin, great job
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    Joann Grisetti
    Date: 10/21/2012 1:06:00 PM
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    Poignant - sad and wonderful all at once. Congratulations.
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 10/20/2012 8:50:00 PM
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    Ache,,,that's all..makes me wonder what you are aching about.... love this poem.... congrats on your rocking win....love pd
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    elizabeth wesley
    Date: 10/11/2012 9:56:00 AM
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    Sounds like you haven't healed Yassie; can I hold you for awhile to see if that helps? Your words are full of pain; let's find release. Love, Elizabeth
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 10/10/2012 12:18:00 PM
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    Sad sad Tanka Yas and nailed to perfection with depth of words. Sure to do well in the contest.
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    Arild Andresen Ertsland
    Date: 10/7/2012 3:02:00 PM
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    A great Tanka,dear Yasmin! A really sad one my friend,but written in such a excellent way.You`ll top the winners list with this gem..Have a lovely new week ahead!
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 10/7/2012 11:14:00 AM
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    Yes, indeed, this is a sad one, YAsmin. I think I will have to go deep into my past to write a sad one for PD!! I'm sure she is gonna love this.
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 10/7/2012 10:46:00 AM
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    So sad from your pen but great write Yasssssssssssssssssssssssssss. Love all day to you. Michael.
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    Barbara Gorelick
    Date: 10/7/2012 12:44:00 AM
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    So sad..and so well written..love the last line. BG
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    Joseph May
    Date: 10/6/2012 5:41:00 PM
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    nice Tanka Yasmin...love the last line...hugs...
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 10/6/2012 3:33:00 PM
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    What a delightful and powerful write my friend! I am enamored by the greatness that this poem possesses! I really enjoyed the incredible nature of this wondrous write Yasmin! What an awe inspired piece, Awesome Work!!
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    Caryl Muzzey
    Date: 10/6/2012 2:54:00 PM
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    A beautiful Tanka, Yasmin. I enjoyed the read, best to you in the contest, a sure winner.~ Caryl
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    Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 10/6/2012 2:34:00 PM
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    Very nice Tanka you have here. Thanks for sharing. Lucy


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