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FAKE LOVE

A LOVE IN YOUR HEART

NOT PURE FROM THE VERY START

BECAUSE OF YOUR HATE

TO THE PERSON WHO HURT YOU

AND GAVE YOU THE GREATEST PAIN

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  1. St.Cross Avatar
    Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 11/28/2012 4:53:00 AM
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    ‡ Its All In The Numbers Baby Girl, LOL. Some Can Become So Obsessed With Thoughts And Things, Sweet Beautiful Maria, Until They Mimmick Or Better Yet Forge Themselves A Cycle Spin, Of Round And Round And Round We Go ? Laughing Madly At The Moon Whileas Pursuing Warped Images Dashing Across The Crimsons Looking Glass Only To Fall Into A Giant Hole Amid The Center Of The Galaxy Tumble Unto The Purple Meadow Below And Pull Dancing Gerbles From Their Bride Of Frankensteins Hair, LOL. Don't Worry About Anothers Fakeries Beautiful Maria, Rather, Shine Bright That They May Be Blessed By The Beauty They Behold Amid Your Ever Loving Light! Good To Find Your Your Precious Heart Again And Keep Brushing Your Beauty's Canvas. 'Happy Holidays.' My Love, Always, Rachel *
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    Vicky Tsiluma
    Date: 10/8/2012 1:19:00 AM
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    Nice write Maria! It's sad when past actions determine our present emotions.
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    Justin Bordner
    Date: 10/7/2012 11:28:00 AM
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    Reminds me of the chaos that mistrust can manifest in a naive mind and heart Maria - important message here - J.A.B. %
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    shirin neshat
    Date: 10/7/2012 4:16:00 AM
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    so true. i learn is not good to date someone who isnt over there ex.
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 10/6/2012 10:03:00 PM
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    ohhhh....fake love but poem isn't fake as your gem was gauged in my pawnshop, lol... great write my friend!!! keep up the good work!!! good luck and best wishes always!!!! love and hugs:) Leonora
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 10/6/2012 3:53:00 PM
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    Interesting work..Yes, people can carry some more baggage around in life..Enjoyed reading ...Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 10/6/2012 11:38:00 AM
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    Fake love - (watch out for "copy" - "copy" will soon be broken .......) Good written dear Maria. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo Date: 10/6/2012 11:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oppps I think i will change my title hahahah thanks friend Anne Lise for your comments :) good day


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