Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
Pinterest button
Comments Inbox


Oops, something happened to this poem. It is no longer here.

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 10/8/2012 2:25:00 PM

    hahaha, very clever. My favorite part was blow your despair a w a a a y y y!!!! thanks for reading my whiteness trio. I was so inspired that time.

    Grisetti Avatar Joann Grisetti Date: 10/8/2012 3:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It was truly lovely.
  1. Date: 10/7/2012 1:41:00 PM

    Were you listening to the Stones? Love the abrupt exchange of dialogue. We do tend to privately dismiss eachother, well dare I say, alot. I do hope you woke with gentler emotions and that the angel of remission visited you in your sleep.

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 4:55:00 PM

    Yes you can say that again,Joann.This IS really something different from your pen.Its a highly interesting subject you got here,although I was a bit confused about who says what:) Raw poetry comes to my mind after reading it..raw poetry brought right through the pen.Loved it! Take Care,Arild

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 3:06:00 PM

    Interesting form... nice poem... Terry

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 1:56:00 PM

    Cute

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 10:48:00 AM

    Yes, it is different Joann - Who has more rights to assert their feelings than the other (?) ...... So do I read your poem ...... maybe I'm wrong .... (?) oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 10:45:00 AM

    This is a new approach for you Joann! I love this write, it captivates and keeps the reader interested in your write as they read it! It not only holds the reader but allows him/her to delve into your minds eye and see what you were thinking! A very creative work here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this poem this afternoon! Fantastic piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 10:41:00 AM

    Wow thanks for the comment you either live each day or die each day and it is all in phases

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 10:15:00 AM

    Be honest, be brutal. This poem talked to me when I was almost asleep. It is different from my others.