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Nocturnal Wanderings

Epitaph ready I scout the darkness for ground digging up a grave A quiet night burial for deep dark sorrows of my heart 10/5/2012 Yesha Shah

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  1. Date: 10/27/2012 8:26:00 PM

    Yesha, a lovely metaphorical tanka you have penned. Congratulations on your wonderful win!

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 3:48:00 PM

    I remember this awesome one. Congrats on your win, Yesha!

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 11:42:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D."s "Tanka~sad song" Yesha. Love, Carol XXXX

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 11:23:00 AM

    Congratulations on your smashing win Yesha xx

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 10:51:00 AM

    congrads on your win Yesha..

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 7:18:00 AM

    Congrats on another win with this sad tanka!

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 4:07:00 PM

    CONGRATS YESHA ON A DYNAMIC WIN FOR THIS SUPERB TANKA LUV ..

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 2:00:00 PM

    this is great, congrats on your win Yesha

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 11:50:00 AM

    Yesha, congratulations with your to be or not to be tanka poem in my contest... take care of yourself' always~PD

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 4:19:00 AM

    Big congrats from Spain xx

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 10:11:00 PM

    Touching and difficult Tanka. well done lee

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 11:37:00 PM

    great write friend Yesha..congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 7:54:00 AM

    Congrats on your Big win with this great Tanka!

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 7:54:00 AM

    Nicely done Yesha! Love how you've associated the physical and symbolic grave. Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 5:09:00 AM

    well penned...congrats on your win Yesha

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 5:01:00 AM

    congrads on your win Yesha...been very busy , how about you...haven't been to the cinema yet..

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 3:26:00 AM

    Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 12:20:00 AM

    I remember how I loved this the first time. Congrats, my friend you deserved the win.

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 11:11:00 PM

    Beautiful Yesha, Many congrats on this win.

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 4:13:00 PM

    I know a couplet of cleansing rituals like this write a concern on a small bit of paper let it float away in a stream! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Courtney Avatar Ruth Courtney Date: 10/12/2012 2:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    nice
  1. Date: 10/11/2012 12:41:00 PM

    A well earned congratulations on your win in Susan's "Single Tanka" contest Yesha. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 12:03:00 PM

    Wow! Great write. Displacing old skeletons with sorrow.....Congratulations on your win Yesha. Su

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 3:01:00 PM

    Creative work..I hope that your heart if not sorrowful though..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the review of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 7:01:00 AM

    Or is it for PD's contest?

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 6:28:00 PM

    Hope you can bury those sorrows. Nice poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 7:38:00 AM

    Quite a sad write Yesha.. love the title

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 4:08:00 AM

    this is so sad Yesha, yet compelling...

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 12:48:00 PM

    awesome write, Yesha

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 8:34:00 AM

    winner for me yesh... deeply scribed with lines that flame the senses!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 3:50:00 PM

    A touching and beautifully written poem Yesha - Wish you good luck with your poem in this contest. - Have a lovely weekend - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

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