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Haunted Whiteness

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Haunted Whiteness

The sky was infused with an abnormal moon It was so large showing off a great white light The whiteness carries on causing one to swoon Casting dark shadows off the trees in the night There is a white candle in an upstairs room That illuminates the bristles of a broom Somewhere the occupant loves to fly on by Leaves a blazing white trail within the night sky
Russell Sivey Entrant into Anthony Slauson's "Whiteness" contest 10/4/2012

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  1. Date: 10/6/2012 6:32:00 AM
    PHENOMENAL PIECE RUSSELL LUV WITH OUTSTANDING WORDS TO IMPRESS FOR WHITENESS CONTEST .. I ESPECIALLY AM CAPTIVATED BY THE FIRST LINE LUV .. BEST WISHES FOR A BIG WIN .. ONCE AGAIN I CANNOT SEE ANY WORDS FOR THE TWO POEMS ABOVE THIS ONE LUV ..

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 12:58:00 PM
    Winner written all over this one..Good luck in the contest..Enjoyed reading your creative creative work..You managed to use several expressions about the theme of whiteness...Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate your kind review of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 3:30:00 AM
    truly an engaging write, smooth and delicately white even with some tones of mystery,russel... such chemisrty of images.. " white trail within the night sky:) winning huggs!

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 10:06:00 PM
    Very descriptive entry for the contest. Good luck with it.