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A state of absance

I'm in this state of abance and you know blissfuly unaware
I'm not one for ignorance but right now I just could not care
As for this brief moment my thoughts now cease to exist
Yeah I'm a missing component, it's a release from all this

Forgetting my donts and does, having no worrie nor fear
Having uncomplicated views, my thoughts for once clear
I'm now in silent mode, with a brief second of emptyness
If I don't my head will simply explode, with all this madness

It's like I'm in the lost and found but kind of more inbetween
I'm on a merry go round, it's like I'm in this constant dream
It's where I'm by the sea and waves crashing on the shore
It's that place of serenity, something I've been longing for

If I can persivear but patense is not really one of my vertues
I'm tierd of being in this atmosphere, with the same old issues
I'm not one for ignorance but right now I'm neither here not there
It's like I'm in a state of abance but you know blissfuly unaware

With this Im trying to explain what it feels like when you need a bit of time out
a bit more space in your head just not having to listen when wrote forgot to save 
so deleted by accident anyoed with myself as somebits not quit the same 
but cant remember them bits Ive took a few words from others Ive wrote like
a state of confusion a state of mind and atate of wonder this is part four if you like
the final chapter in that little anthology they all inter lnk with each other best to read
a state of confusion first then a state of wonder then a state of mind then this
to make sense  -  written between augst 2010 and april 2011...........................







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  1. Date: 10/9/2012 9:28:00 PM

    Wow. . . I am reading more and more of your poetry and I am really liking what I'm seeing. I gottah say, I'm impressed. This poem should have at least 10 comments of praise. :) I like how you explain what your trying to express at the end of your poems. Very helpful and insightful. And again, great rhyming scheme and conversational tone throughout. Always, Laura