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The Poisoned Pen: Genesis of Vomiticus Grammaticus - Part IV

IV.


It was during this sleepless night that I made the decision
to use the poisonous pen to write a story with --
keep writing until the very last drop of ink was used,
a venture that ended up keeping me terribly amused.

If I couldn't destroy the pen, I could at least try
to write the bloody beast dry!

The story came pouring out in a frenzy of inspiration,
outdoing my previous attempts at premise and plot,
churning out the entire story in one near-seamless shot.

I barely drank nor ate, as the story unfurled,
weaving together an allegorical, parallel world.
One of the main characters 
was a Daemon named Vomiticus Grammaticus, 
partially modeled after Mozart's daemonic muse, 
the insidious alter-ego, Amadeus.

~(Here I must add an important detail:
it usually takes about eleven ballpoint pens,
which the poisonous pen surely was,
to fill four hundred and fifty large pages of paper
in fine, small handwriting.
But the poisoned pen put up a fight,
so much so, I worried how it might never run dry.
In fact, it finally ran dry,
when the words, 'The End', I had affixed
upon page six hundred and sixty six.)~

The feeling of satisfaction only lasted for a brief moment
before I noticed movement in my peripheral vision.
Hand and wrist throbbing in pain,
eyes sore and red from the strain,
I turned in my chair
with a jaw-dropping stare.

There stood the Daemon, Vomiticus Grammaticus, in the flesh,
staring back at me with bottomless, black eyes,
and a condescending, twisted sneer.

The putrid stench of worm-rot, sulphur and ozone filled my nostrils
as I realized how I truly was an eternal fool,
having been honed into the Devil's own tool.

"My dear boy, I am impressed!", started Vomiticus Grammaticus.
"You summoned me from the depths of hell,
with this splendidly powerful, new shell!"

"I have been patiently waiting for a fresh design of flesh,
and you....you, why you poured your heart and soul into detailing me!
Yes! You detailed a most devious monstrosity!"

"My dear child, did you believe this all to be mere fantasy?
A non-permanent experience of guilty depravity?
No! What you helped to unleash, is an epic destiny!
In time you shall see......oh, how you shall surely see."

"For this, I owe you eternally,
you shall be my master eventually.
But not before I light this world on fire -
the fate of humanity will be severely dire,
as I fan the flames ever higher.
You are linked to my purest daemonic desire,
together we shall dance upon humanity's wretched pyre."

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  1. Date: 5/1/2013 10:38:00 AM

    Fantastic, Chris. What an imigination you have. Loved every word. I was throughly entertained, and that's what a great writer does. Elaine

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 11:52:00 AM

    I had to read all four parts without stopping to comment. WOW. I love it. A great drunken pen.

    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner Date: 10/5/2012 10:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Joann, I am glad that you enjoyed the series. Thanks for stopping by.
  1. Date: 10/4/2012 12:19:00 AM

    H ha ha you know Chris all the nuts don't justcome out in May, this is hilarious love it

    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner Date: 10/5/2012 10:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, the irony of it is....you also showed up here ha ha! Na-ner, na-ner! :P
  1. Date: 10/4/2012 12:01:00 AM

    This composition gives creadence to how we can be assisted by Providence in our endeavors - 'automatic writing' also comes to mind - maybe working with the Devil can be rewarding - I respect the stamina of the storyline Chris - J.A.B. %

    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner Date: 10/5/2012 10:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for even reading through the blasted thing :D
  1. Date: 10/3/2012 11:24:00 PM

    Gulp. I was thirsty. Now, I am sated. Quoth, beckoned, my lust inundated, I lean back, numbness, now; fully sedated.

    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner Date: 10/5/2012 10:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad that you enjoyed the series(I think? lol). Thank you for reading.