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Jasmine's Whisper

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Jasmine's Whisper


Jasmine's whisper fills the air chirping birds in trees paintbrush touch in distant sky coldness in the breeze. On twilight's pink wings a journey starts towards night amid Church bells' ring. ******************************* Placement: 3rd ;(October 2012) By:kash poet Date:3rd Oct.2012 Contest:Wonder of Dusk in Seguidilla Sequidilla--- is Spanish in origin: a verse with 7 lines with a syllable count of 7, 5, 7, 5, 5, 7, 5… Line 2 rhymes with Line 4,and line 5 rhymes with line 7

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  1. Date: 2/20/2013 12:26:00 PM
    Love it kash ;} and you got a win ;}

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 10:13:00 AM
    Interesting form. I enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks for stopping by.

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 7:27:00 AM
    Thanking you today for your comments on my writing Kash. I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week. Love, Carol XXXX

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 8:07:00 PM
    beautiful images...very nicely written poem, enjoyed the read :)

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 10:56:00 PM
    CONGRATS KASH ON A SUPER VICTORY .. AMAZING LUV ..

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 4:04:00 PM
    I love all of the thoughts here Kash, awesome write!!

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 1:29:00 PM
    Wow, the imagery is perfect, as if you sat outside all night and scripted what was seen! Congratulations on your victory!

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 7:03:00 AM
    You just keep getting better..congrats. BG

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 5:18:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Wonder of Dusk in Sequidilla"contest Kash. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 3:05:00 AM
    this is fabulous...congratulations on ur win..:)))

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 5:11:00 AM
    Kash, this is just a beauty. Enjoyed it!! Hope you had a great day yesterday.. :)

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 8:49:00 AM
    Soooo beautiful...a painting in words! My senses reeling! Cynthia

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 9:18:00 PM
    You're a great painter in this awesome poem , Kash!!! I love it!!!! Thanks for your wonderful birthday greetings!!! you, too! it's coming!!!! hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 2:20:00 PM
    Kash, the monoku this time was not imagined. Remember the barn swallows I wrote about this summer? Those same birds left last month and their nests stayed above our door. I really miss them!! waiting for new poetry from you. soupmail.

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 2:01:00 PM
    ahha, kashi bud .. is this for our yasmin?.. :) huggs!

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 1:38:00 PM
    feels better Kash ;)..oh I see it had to be in Seguidilla form ;) [poo lol] XXXOOO Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 11:47:00 AM
    With the paint brush - you have painted this beautiful. Thanks for reading my work. Have a great day. Lucy

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 9:50:00 PM
    sparkling and sensational portrait of dusk Kash .. best of luck luv for fascinating imagery ..

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 3:46:00 PM
    You've painted quite a picture there,,,and it's animated with sounds !! Love it !! Thanks for dropping by my page !!

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 3:08:00 PM
    Lovely!!! soup mail HUGS Light & Love

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