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  1. Date: 10/4/2012 2:25:00 PM
    This is so lovely, and melancholy. I love that kind of poetry!!

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 10:43:00 AM
    This delightful tanka describes the New Jersey shore very accurately. Good write.

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 9:17:00 AM
    Craig, i love this tanka so much, i was drawn right to the center of the image, and got lost waiting for the sun myself.. xox~pd

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 1:35:00 PM
    nicely done -

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 1:23:00 PM
    Lovely! The magic castle line is wonderful. BG

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 1:06:00 PM
    Lovely scene in this tanka, Craig! Very nice. Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 11:29:00 AM
    A beautiful tanka written. Your captivating scenes serenade the mind!