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Winter Sand

Lonely waters edge
Where lovers caressed and strolled,
Where children frolicked
And magic castles arose,
Waits for the warm sun once more.

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  1. Date: 10/4/2012 2:25:00 PM

    This is so lovely, and melancholy. I love that kind of poetry!!

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 10:43:00 AM

    This delightful tanka describes the New Jersey shore very accurately. Good write.

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 9:17:00 AM

    Craig, i love this tanka so much, i was drawn right to the center of the image, and got lost waiting for the sun myself.. xox~pd

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 1:35:00 PM

    nicely done -

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 1:23:00 PM

    Lovely! The magic castle line is wonderful. BG

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 1:06:00 PM

    Lovely scene in this tanka, Craig! Very nice. Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 11:29:00 AM

    A beautiful tanka written. Your captivating scenes serenade the mind!