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The Bather

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The Bather

Tiger baths his wounds
Cold water soothes like medicine
He will fight again

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  1. Date: 10/6/2012 5:13:00 AM

    The second word in your first line should be "bathes". In this case, you want the verb instead of the noun. Good senryu.

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 3:29:00 PM

    hi Cynthia like this senryu, fel the pain of those wounds from your words, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 10:32:00 AM

    nice poem Cynthia..nice senryu :) thanks for sharing. Good day