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He who offers me Sun

Shaz Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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He who offers me Sun

Meeting you was like being greeted by sunlight
The hair on my skin reaching to take you all in 
Embellishing the energy you radiate from within
Just feeling your rays running along my skin
Such warmth and happiness envelopes my heart
You make me realise I’m alive inside once again
Knocking on that door of chance and a new friend
Love again, a place that I would never expect to see
But this is the dream that someday I know will come 
The mystery man that I meet who offers me the sun

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  1. Date: 12/18/2012 3:42:00 PM
    I checked out and liked your Blog.

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 10:50:00 AM
    He will be eclipsed by your Beauty and will be powerless under your spell. Wonderful piece Shaz, really enjoyed it.

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 12/8/2012 6:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Rick aaaaaw ty :)
  1. Date: 12/1/2012 12:40:00 AM
    I hope he was a nice guy? Worthy of your beautiful poetry. :o)

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 12/1/2012 4:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well I hope he is too - one day when I meet that person who makes me feel like that poem :)
  1. Date: 10/6/2012 7:49:00 AM
    beautifully written! thank you for your wonderful comments on my poetry! i look forward to reading more of your work!

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 10/6/2012 7:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for stopping by Germaine, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I really liek this one myself :D
  1. Date: 10/4/2012 8:23:00 PM
    Absolutely loved it Shaz! Kudos for a beautiful romantic write! I have found a new poet friend! Love and big hugs, Jack xox

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 10/6/2012 7:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Aaaw thanks Jack mwah :D
  1. Date: 10/4/2012 9:38:00 AM
    Absolutely romantic...and passionate! Beautiful poem, Shaz! Ruben.

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 10/6/2012 7:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thankyou Ruben :D
  1. Date: 10/3/2012 7:08:00 PM
    Your title is just as captivating as your body...body of your poetry. My heartfelt thanks for your praises.

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 10/3/2012 9:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Glenn. Glad this poem got your attention :)
  1. Date: 10/3/2012 3:31:00 PM
    Hi Shaz good to have you back, hope the right person comes along soon, al the best Owen

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 10/3/2012 9:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Owen.....it's great to be back :) missed everyone - Shaz
  1. Date: 10/3/2012 9:53:00 AM
    this is beautiful!

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 10/3/2012 9:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you ilene. Glad u enjoyed it
  1. Date: 10/3/2012 8:59:00 AM
    hauntingly beautiful work of art, chaz... you took me there!..love that ending especially... :) huggs!

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 10/3/2012 9:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you nette.... :)
  1. Date: 10/3/2012 6:39:00 AM
    thats a little too hot,can I offer you the moon,lol,great write Shaz

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 10/3/2012 7:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hehehe......cute! - Shaz
  1. Date: 10/3/2012 4:09:00 AM
    ur content is rich.but ur packaging needsa boost.i am watching out for you.

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 10/3/2012 7:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey love the feedback.....I agree i do feel lost in 'the packaging' dept sometimes lol shaz