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Taken Away

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Below is the poem entitled Taken Away which was written by poet Gail Angel Doyle. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Taken Away

Taken Away If suddenly our sleep was taken away Would our bodies still be able to live in a dream? Having the energy of welcoming a new day Without ever absorbing another night’s sleep If suddenly our vision was take away Would our eyes still capture its memories? Of imprints of beauty that came our way Without ever having another chance to see If suddenly the beating of our hearts was taken away Would our hearts still be able to find a way to live? Would it be able to still exist through the love it embraced? And how much left it had to give

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  1. Date: 10/3/2012 10:31:00 AM

    A beautifully written poem Gail. Have a lovely afternoon. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 10/3/2012 4:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Anne, thanks for commenting on my poem Taken Away. Love to you, Gail
  1. Date: 10/2/2012 10:55:00 PM

    Really lovely poem Gail - Shaz

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 10/3/2012 4:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Shaz, thanks for commenting on my poem Taken Away. Hugs, Gail
  1. Date: 10/2/2012 5:40:00 PM

    This is such a brilliant write, I love the way you wove the theme all throughout your poem, expertly I might add! I really enjoyed this delightful and intriguing poem that you have written here my friend! What a tremendous write that I have read this evening! Fabulous piece Gail, Great Work!!