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Sean Sanders

Date: 2/24/2013 6:42:00 AM

WOW!!!!!!! This poem blew me away

Donna Jones

Date: 2/20/2013 11:58:00 AM

This is also an amazing work..I loved the due to clocks power line...wonderful...blessings

Carl Fraser

Date: 12/11/2012 11:56:00 AM

A fine fine write indeed pace, i could picture it all in the words youve penned, nicely done, blessings Carl

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/9/2012 8:53:00 AM

This is an exquisite piece Pace! Absolutely love this ;)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/9/2012 8:52:00 AM

EXQUISITE! Marvelous my friend, superb work. If only I could master the language as you do!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/9/2012 6:50:00 AM

Very passionate work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara

Jacob Cramer

Date: 12/8/2012 1:21:00 PM

Wow, this poem is spectacular, by far one of my favorites I have ever read (and I'm not just saying that). Is it published or what? It's really good, and you are extremely talented... I've read some of your other poems as well. You should visit my site: poeticpossibilities.tk ! I think this poem could have a really good chance of winning one of our contests! Wish you the best with your poetry and I hope you get published! : )Jacob Cramer

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 11/30/2012 1:13:00 PM

‡ Ebony & Ivory, Tis The Beautiful Thought In Which I Gather Amid Your Heart's Com Boxes Below, Sweet Dear Friend. Such Wonderful Softness Within Your Loving Words And Voice Here In This Its Own Equisite Moment In Expressives Canvas Of Verse. Quite Lovely, And Thank You For Your Precious Lights Kind Visit. 'Happy Holidays.' Love, Rachel *

ShnKimMel Clarke

Date: 11/25/2012 6:23:00 PM

mysterious mind

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/22/2012 6:21:00 PM

a man mastering his own longing, exqueiste. Light & Love

nette onclaud

Date: 11/19/2012 12:22:00 PM

you know, i liked the way you surrendered you sense of desire in the end, pace.... lovely pacing and flawless flow... :) huggs!

John Loving III

Date: 11/2/2012 8:23:00 AM

Masterpiece!!! I was captured with the way you used your words. Lots of improvement.

Carma Reed

Date: 11/1/2012 5:55:00 PM

Just wanted to stop by, and give you warm hugs, it's been awhile.... No loose sight my dear PACE.... Xoxoxo

Carma Reed Date: 11/1/2012 5:56:00 PM

My best has come out lol

david scott

Date: 11/1/2012 5:30:00 PM

lovely write mate good introspection i like to think im articulate too thankyou for comments on mine davidscott

ANDREA TRAVIS

Date: 10/29/2012 6:37:00 PM

EVERY COMMENT i MAKE HAS TOO MANY CHARACTERS. Loved your comment and your prose. would like to talk shop. This is what I do, my life is the paper and quill. plz email me. andreatravis

Owen Yeates

Date: 10/26/2012 1:15:00 PM

Hi Pace very compelling piece I was totally captured by it, great write, all the best Owen

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 10/26/2012 1:33:00 PM

Thank you once again Owen!!

Anne Currin

Date: 10/26/2012 11:59:00 AM

this pieces gave me some chills, I kid you not! I love it, wonderfully written!

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 10/26/2012 12:49:00 PM

A pleasure to see you stop by..Thank you Anne! :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/25/2012 5:57:00 PM

Everyones talking about love tonight hmmm. Light & Love

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 10/26/2012 12:47:00 PM

All smiles!! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/25/2012 12:02:00 PM

Very unique and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Sara

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 10/26/2012 12:47:00 PM

Thank you so much Sara!! HUGS

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/22/2012 10:54:00 AM

enthralling! Light & Love

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 10/23/2012 12:22:00 PM

It means alot Debbie..Thank you!!

elizabeth wesley

Date: 10/21/2012 8:48:00 PM

Was mesmerized till the last line Pace! You know how to pursue and I hope the prey was willing. Great write I enjoyed reading. Luv Lizzie

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 10/23/2012 12:22:00 PM

Thank you dearly Elizabeth!!

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 10/19/2012 3:24:00 AM

Captivating write! Love how you've focused on the pupils - it is there where it all begins. Nicely done Pace!

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 10/23/2012 12:20:00 PM

Thank you dearly Vicky!!

RONNY MADONSELA

Date: 10/17/2012 6:43:00 AM

Such raw emotion captured so beautifully , Trully impressive work, Enjoyed your write this afternoon.

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 10/23/2012 12:19:00 PM

Thank you Ronny!!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/16/2012 8:44:00 AM

Beautiful poem here. You sure know how to put your words together. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 10/23/2012 12:18:00 PM

Thank you dearly Lucilla!!

Catie Lindsey

Date: 10/15/2012 6:08:00 PM

Okay, Pace, I know you had left a comment on one of my poems, and when i looked to return the favor, the comment was gone. I hope I have not offended you in any way. BTW ~ this is a lovely poem. hugs, Catie :)

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 10/23/2012 12:18:00 PM

Thanks Catie! Hugs!

Anne Lise Andresen

Date: 10/14/2012 3:33:00 PM

Just wanted to say: Have a nice Sunday evening. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 10/15/2012 10:51:00 AM

Thank you Anne same to you..well have a great Monday!! :)

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 10/14/2012 4:27:00 AM

Ahhh! Beautiful penning! Cynthia

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 10/15/2012 10:51:00 AM

Thank you Cynthia!! :)

Joy Wellington

Date: 10/13/2012 10:08:00 PM

O what a beauty! An exquisite piece of yarn made from the poet's loom. I love it! One love. Joy Wells

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 10/15/2012 10:52:00 AM

Lol..Thank you Joy!! :)

Carma Reed

Date: 10/12/2012 3:54:00 PM

Sweet words of Devine ink in your pen as always pace

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 10/15/2012 10:52:00 AM

Thank you always Carma~!!!

craig cornish

Date: 10/11/2012 12:45:00 PM

Damn----Pace---this is really a great write, so glad you drew me here and thank you!!

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 10/15/2012 10:53:00 AM

Indeed a pleasure to have you stop by Craig..Thanks alot!!!

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