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  1. Date: 11/22/2012 8:34:00 AM
    coming back to this super fine poem of yours, DAvid, to say HELLO and even though it's not thanksgiving there for you guys, I wish you a happy day. You are one awesome guy! hope all is going well for your wife too. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 4:14:00 AM
    so emotional...I can feel it in my heart...beautifully written poem friend David...thank you so much for sharing..hugs **Maria**

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 7:45:00 PM
    This leaves me breathless David what a trip to share, emotional and full of the unexpected. I sure enjoyed the adventure!

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 9:16:00 AM
    Goosebumps! This is one heck of a write, David. Going on my fav list. Love, Su

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 9:10:00 AM
    A long drop of tear falls down my face for you. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 2:19:00 AM
    emotions turn and twist, may love remain, just be another poem to make your list, and better still from ye... good one mate!

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 6:31:00 PM
    You write with such ease and emotion..it's an amazing ride everytime I read one of your works. Thanks for commeting on mine, too...Holly

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 12:41:00 PM
    You certainly make the reader (me at least) feel your words... very nice... splendid... Terry

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 11:47:00 AM
    Lovely touching write David with well expressed emotions..

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 9:02:00 AM
    nicely written David....

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 10:49:00 AM
    Such a pleasure to be reading you today my friend. Thanks for the soup mail. And my prayers still are said for you and your wife. Michael

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 11:20:00 PM
    Just beautiful David! You've brought out the emotions splendidly!

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 10:01:00 PM
    A very interesting write. Keep writing, Jancarl

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 4:55:00 PM
    i feel the pain, been near insane, and fell with a great bloody flop, your words are great , good ol mate, don't let em ever stop...

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 10:59:00 AM
    Hi David! First of all I would like to say that it is great seeing you back here on the Soup,and to see that your poetic pen still does its magic.Secondly,wow! this is one roller coaster riding gem you`ve posted here!Deep,touching and a splendid poem.Love the imagery you`re using here,indeed a wild ride! Have a peaceful and blessed weekend my friend.Love and warm thoughts to your family!

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 8:42:00 AM
    HOW WONDERFUL TO HAVE U BACK DAVID AS I AM MESMERIZED BY THESE DRAMATIC LINES SO BRILLIANTLY WRITTEN LUV .. HOPE ALL THINGS THAT KEPT U FROM US HAVE NOW RESOLVED LUV ..

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 10:22:00 PM
    this is like a masterpiece of yours, David. I expected to see a comment of mine already under it, but I think I has seen it before at PFT. Absolutely wonderful piece.

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 8:54:00 PM
    Hi David, how are you?? I can not say much for me,,, but HI... TEX

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 7:28:00 PM
    An excellent write full of emotions David!Love it very much.

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 6:31:00 PM
    I love this wild ride - love, death, hope, twists and turns. Almost enough to make me dizzy.

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