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  1. Date: 6/17/2013 12:02:00 AM
    I do like how you wrote this ;}

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 3:05:00 AM
    Wow what away to wake up and read such a great gender of a poem nicely penned Tristen I loved it love always Carma

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 3:09:00 AM
    beautiful poem with a heart.....thanks for ur sweet comment on my poem...:))))

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 12:41:00 AM
    This poem is wonderful!

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 11:12:00 AM
    Wow!!! I'm coming back in here for the 3rd time around and found your poem completed my dear, Tristen and sooo lovely and awesome... with that baby cry... so touching... Thank you so much for stopping by reading my old poems. love/hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 6:57:00 PM
    Wonderful poem, again. You write only wonderful poems! Thank you for your kind words.

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 9:23:00 AM
    Good Morning Tristen, thank you so much for your hearty comment. I did not know you knew about my birthday. About your poem: the ending is a rejoucing image. To hear a a baby cry, a few seconds after birth, .. The first image of the stillborn, is very sad. I could never imagine the feeling ... thank you once again for your loving comment... love~PD

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 4:57:00 PM
    awesome beauty and emotion continually surrounds your profound lines tristen luv ... a magical quality exudes as your talent once again shines ..

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 2:39:00 PM
    This is very interesting work..A pity that you don't try other forms of poetry from time to time..Yes, we are all born blind to what God has done for us..Much of what we know and understand comes first from our earthly father and mother..For some of those that don't experience that early love from parents, it is much harder for them to understand God's love..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 1:58:00 PM
    quite interesting story, tristen... loved the way you wove this piece with tender phrases and images!.. a beauty!:) huggs!

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 12:23:00 PM
    wonderful poem dear friend Tristen...enjoyed reading before i sleep...thanks for your comments....Good day!! hugs (^_^) **Maria**

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 3:20:00 PM
    very comforting! lovely poem. warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 11:02:00 AM
    Unique and warmly poem Tristen Have a nice afternoon. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 9:20:00 AM
    a gem ready to be polished in its full brilliance, tristen.. looking forward with huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 8:54:00 AM
    wow.... progressing.... ok. i'll come back. lol. thanks a lot! :)

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 8:50:00 AM
    Wow!!! this is wonderful!!! the Mighty King is really Great!! thanks for sharing again this awesome write my dear friend, Tristen. i really have enjoyed reading it tonight! hugs:) Leonora