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Rude, Drunken Pen

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Rude, Drunken Pen

Bloody rude drunken pen has enjoyed a nib of ink or two, reminiscing on a few 
Bad and ugly times, we both admit at times things were, a bit of a mess, 
All kinds of intertwined, confused but along the way making some progress
On the grand masterpiece of all masterpieces – writing bliss 
At first polite, we take in turns, to interject with collaborative words,
Until the air hits us hard, take a breath, where’s your etiquette, manners and respect, 
My turn pen, I command, continue on to write, scribbling like an erratic bird’s nest. 
Pen resists and spits its ink, a dirty blob from its nib…how rude 
All smudged and slurred is a dribbling rambling of everything crude
Across the page leaking its ink, clearly from excessive drink
Dancing on thin ice, my drunken pen decides to try and entice
Inviting me to envelope, his muscular body with smooth fingers 
Such fraternisation you drunken sleaze, how do you expect to please
The love of your life, giving you permission to write and express your ink with ease 
Drunken pen is at a loss as reflects on his drunken state, its very late
Blubbering relaxed words across the page, deep within and obscure
Then I realise that my drunken pen is sometimes a little insecure
He has a way of making me melt when I think of his 50 shades of blue
Each drink of ink that fills his nib, that prints our words, that stains my skin 
Is in every way the partnership of creative bliss and my perfect hue


2nd October 2012
Written for Drunken Pen - Part 2 Contest

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  1. Date: 2/13/2013 5:53:00 PM
    However did I miss this one? I am intoxicated by your words, a very satisfying drink! To my favorites.

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 12:37:00 AM
    That is awesome! Congrats on your win.. :o)

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 12:17:00 PM
    A grin escaped my face when I read this one. great win Shaz, congrats! One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 9:24:00 PM
    shaz, congratulations with your awesome win in the "Drunken Pen Round 2 " contest.....love the way you hold your pen. good night :-) xox PD

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 7:41:00 AM
    congrats on a great win Shaz

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 10/19/2012 6:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    sorry 'Like' entering contests hehe
    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 10/19/2012 6:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Thanks Joseph.....I think I live entering contests - Shaz
  1. Date: 10/19/2012 4:50:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Joann's "Drunken Pen" contest Shaz. Love, Carol

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 10/19/2012 6:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Carol - thanku very much :) I was surprised to be on the list, but glad to be there - Shaz
  1. Date: 10/19/2012 12:56:00 AM
    very cute

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 10/19/2012 6:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Ruth - thanku - Shaz
  1. Date: 10/18/2012 1:34:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win, Shaz . Su

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 10/19/2012 6:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Su - thankyou so much - Shaz
  1. Date: 10/17/2012 12:57:00 AM
    This pen is a drunken master and I aint talkin Jackie Chan this is BANGIN!!!!

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 10/19/2012 6:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL - cheers Sha'ntez
  1. Date: 10/6/2012 7:52:00 AM
    oh wow I LOVE this! the imagery and the flow of words, its pure magic!

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 10/6/2012 8:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh wow...thank you Germaine! lovely to get your thoughts - :D
  1. Date: 10/4/2012 9:44:00 AM
    Cheers and...Hiccup! : ) "Each drink of ink that fills his nib, that prints our words, that stains my skin"!! Excellent! It's a winner! Ruben.

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 10/6/2012 8:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Aaaaw thanks Ruben - :D
  1. Date: 10/4/2012 8:06:00 AM
    Sometimes at nite I'm in that mood. And my pen too is a little crude. But the next day I see the mistakes I made and correct my errors for a perfect grade.

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 10/4/2012 7:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hehe.....oh yes. Like your reply John :)
  1. Date: 10/3/2012 4:30:00 PM
    yes i do like you 50 shades of blue ink offering...

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 10/4/2012 7:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hehehe.......good old 50 shades hey. Blue is a nice change lol - thanks Don :)
  1. Date: 10/2/2012 10:49:00 PM
    bravo Shaz loved it,great write girl,good luck for the contest

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 10/4/2012 7:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey thanks Richard...it's all over the place in a way...but I guess thats what a drunken pen might do lol - Shaz