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Becoming Friends

When I think of you, a night sky,
Etching bold scribbles in July
That trickle and rap on my window
A bluish-white Craig of sea,
That beckoned my eyes to feel the dew
And in your river's wide flow,
New friendship ambles and rides a halo.
Searching the essence in moon’s follies
Amidst  a current of reasons,
You become a fluid stallion.

When I think of you, I recall
First coming to the Soup last fall
And befriending your every turn 
An inspiration from a walk to a waltz,
Then dance and soar, and sing
As you flew on iridescent wings.
Then, with a brush of gypsy- Nette’s  pen;
Landing on the highest branch,
Against the dark of a night sky
You become a sapphire butterfly.



 
For Tracie Edwards' When I Think of You Contest
Collab of nette onclaud and Craig Cornish

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  1. Date: 10/11/2012 9:03:00 AM

    congrats to us, craig.. i was just wondering why you name wasn't on the list??... we are a greeeat team, yeah!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 10:10:00 AM

    thanks for the joy, craig.. and thanks too for appreciating my piece for your contest; i'm honored!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 9:28:00 PM

    TWO OF THE BEST POETS MERGING THEIR TALENTS IN AN EXQUISITE ENTRY CRAIG .. WINNING WISHES TO U AND NETTE MY BEST FRIEND .. THANKXX SO MUCH FOR MY 1ST PLACE WIN IN YOUR INCREDIBLE CHALLENGE .. AMSO HONORED AND BLESSED AND APPRECIATE LUV ..