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An Apologetic Prosy

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An Apologetic Prosy

There was a time, when I felt totally undesirable unjustifiably [I now know] and you being in your infancy felt so.. un-understood, writhing in a man’s body, seemingly a child with the heart of a warrior, a man, with all a man’s needs. There was a time, when time stood still, and time meant nothing, and age was but an unjustifiable number on a page of societal crap. I needed you. You wanted me. And so………….we were. There was a time, so long ago, it seems a passing dream; we paired, we parted, and life went on… Now, as time seems to slide by with the speed of passing film I remember, not without wonder…Who am I? And where are you? Do you remember? I am not at all sure [for who ever is…] and I am sorry, if our momentary joy, brought you anything else...In the deep of night sometimes [often, truth be told] I wonder, should I say….sorry? for loving you?

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  1. Date: 2/25/2013 5:03:00 PM

    a nice poem SKAT

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 3:39:00 PM

    Congrats on your win. Sorry this is late. I just figured out how to see the other entries. I'm new here.

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 6:35:00 AM

    sorry i am late with congratulations Debbie, life caught up with me lo l xx

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 8:05:00 AM

    Yes, so many thoughts here we all have thought then tossed and brought back again. You capture the uncertain moments of something we all should have while still enough emotional wall to guard our sanity but self effacing enough to ask ourselves these questions, and perhaps remember was good...

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 10:18:00 PM

    Love it , Debs. congrats on this win.

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 9:16:00 PM

    congrats on a great win...

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 8:36:00 PM

    Congrats!

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 11:37:00 AM

    lovely write...Congratulations on your win friend Debbie. Good day always!! hugs, Maria

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 8:20:00 AM

    Debbie~ congratulations with the wonderful win in Frank's ""DO YOU REMEMBER? " contest. have yourself a nice day~ xox~PD

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 7:14:00 AM

    Wow, this is such an open, honest write. I especially love the ending. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 6:44:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win - in both contests, Debbie. I can feel the uncertainty as the poem unfolds. I think that it will be comforting to know whether the other person also spare us a thought. Love, Su

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 8:42:00 PM

    DEBBIE , congratulations, with your awesome poem in MICHAEL'S contest..... xox~pd

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 8:29:00 PM

    So sincere and touching Debbie. Congrats on this wonderful write. Hugs

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 7:50:00 AM

    My hearty congratulations on your awesome win, Debbie! hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 5:09:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest Debbie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 1:39:00 AM

    lovely write friend Debbie...Congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 8:51:00 PM

    Time has never stood still for me. Congratulations on your win Debbie.

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 7:26:00 PM

    I guess this is the type of question we all have about someone or something in our past. You have written an extremely sensitive poem. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 4:45:00 PM

    A very deep and moving winning poem Debbie. A big congrats.

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 4:27:00 PM

    Congrats Debbie on my only 5 winner contest with your 4 th place win. Loved it !! Great work my dear sweet friend. Luv n hugs Michael

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 8:20:00 AM

    Hi Debbie - I am mystified and enthralled at this one. love, Kathy (soup mail)

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 11:35:00 PM

    This is different Deb, deep and unique. I liked it alot.

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 7:44:00 PM

    ....*.* Ps., A Beautiful Touching Favourite, By An Even More Beautiful & Exceptionally Talented In Favourites Poetess *.*....

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 7:34:00 PM

    *.* I Don't Think Anyone Should Ever Say Their Sorry For Truly Loving ? This Is A Very Touching & Beautiful Poem, Dear Gifted & Beautiful Debra Guzzi ˜ Perhaps Even More So Because Its Your Priceless Heart's Painting ˜ My Love, Tristen *.*