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Zhwoop

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Zhwoop

When sending out an I-Phone text,
I listen for the noise
That lets you know your text was sent – 
It’s one of texting’s joys.

The sound is soft and sensitive;
It gently does convey
The fact your message made it through
And now it’s on its way.

A little tiny airy zhwoop
Describes the note I hear.
It’s like a subtle sigh that someone’s
Whispered in my ear.

I rarely text, but when I do,
The part that I love best
Is waiting for my confirmation,
Zhwoopily expressed.

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  1. Date: 10/4/2012 4:24:00 PM
    Your the best ilene. The rhyme and rythem just flows like butta'.

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 10:30:00 PM
    Very nice poem ilene.Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 4:14:00 PM
    I have no clue about this but this is a Great little poem about that sound!!

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 12:45:00 PM
    you said it with flair and glitz, ilene.." zhwoopily expressed!... a delight!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 5:49:00 AM
    What a nice clever poem you have here, Ilene!...Mine goes 'didlely beep' and it IS a comforting sound now that I think of it - Tim

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 7:41:00 PM
    What a lovely rhyming poem. Since you've read my poems you know that I love Rhyme. What a great subject to write a poem about too. I absolutely adore your poem. Bravo!

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 4:36:00 PM
    You're farther along with technology than I! I feel I'm missing something not hearing the 'zhwoop!!!.' A delightful piece, with your trademark cadence and rhyming. BRAVO Ilene!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 3:13:00 PM
    Thank you for the I-Phone text, and visit on my poem Ilene. - A poem with modern word is "in" today, well done - oxox love Anne-Lise :)