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Sending a unicorn to PD

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Sending a unicorn to PD

(This one's from God's POV:)

Dear Unicorn, 
I never sent you on earth,
'Cuz I was afraid of what they'll do to you

But on October 7th, I'll set you free
You know why! It's PD's birthday!!
Go to her, give her your charm
One little visit won't do you any harm!

Embrace her, love her, Oh boy!
Let her cuddle like you're a soft toy
Peek at her with your lovely big eyes
Give her the wish of no sad 'goodbye's

Give her some magic
Like the one she has in her PS words
Give her a hug
And make the birds
Sing a happy birthday song for her :)

Dear unicorn, go to PD
Give her all the love,
Give her all the happiness,
And only then return home.

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  1. Date: 5/20/2013 8:03:00 AM
    A beautiful gift to one of my fave Soup poetesses. Lovely writing, Apoorva. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 9:08:00 PM
    This was very cute, I hope that unicorn arrives on time. J

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 10:32:00 AM
    Congratulation on your win. She is a lady and a wonderful dedication. Terry

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 8:13:00 PM
    OO loving this poem again and again Apoorva, this is a nice and lovely tribute. Congratulations!!! God bless your blessing poem. Goodnight*LINDA

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 5:16:00 PM
    this is adorable. I can see how it placed high. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 3:42:00 PM
    Congrats, apoorva, pd would have certainly enjoyed this poem:) Jag

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 9:39:00 PM
    Very nice..congratulations on your win...

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 9:24:00 PM
    Congrats on your win apoorva. ~A.O

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 9:01:00 PM
    Congrats on your great win. I Know PD would like this. Great piece...

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 8:11:00 PM
    Excellent magical poem. Thanks for entering my contest.

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 3:32:00 PM
    fantastic.*LUV~SKAT

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 8:39:00 PM
    Apoorva, one of my dear favorite poets,,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 7:29:00 AM
    I am sure that PD loved this one..Great work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thansk for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 2:38:00 PM
    This is a lot of fun, I am sure she appreciated the poem.

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 11:35:00 AM
    Hey hey, today I am on P.S. looking, it is a long time since I've been here but now I'm here to read your poems, in the hope that you will read my latest poem, I liked your poem a lot .sweet write indeed!! Hugs Laila

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 8:18:00 AM
    Aww...so sweet! I liked reading this from God's point of view - very creative :) congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 3:03:00 PM
    What a delightful read and I see you've won with it in a contest...congrats. Magical creatures for sharing !!

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 12:26:00 AM
    Many congrats Apoorva for this wonderful win.

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 2:45:00 PM
    this is really lovely, your words are so full of enchantment...

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 1:19:00 PM
    Congratulations on your super win in P.D.'s "Unicorn" contest Apoorva. Love, Carol

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