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Thoughts

My feelings...
The thoughts on my brain...
I cant express them...
So it drives me insane...
Writing this poetry...
Is the best way to explain...
Its time to get deep...
At this moment I can't sleep...
Life sucks...
Its so stressful...
School and family drama...
This *****ain't helpful...
Making me want to end it all...
As if I were on top of a building...
And I'm ready to fall...
So who can save me?
I don't think anyone can...
Because i'm in too deep...
Inside of my head....
It's not a pretty place...
It's no sunny day in the meadow...
So there is no emotion on this 
face...
Like a volcano with all of these 
thoughts....
Too much on my plate...
So all I can do is wait...

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  1. Date: 10/13/2012 10:46:00 AM
    I hope that you are not in that stressful place that your writing down for us to read helped you deal with it..Very creative and descriptive work ...Sara