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Dusk

A beginning and an end Dusk a gentle sigh Goodbye to this day's wonder Soon the night birds cry Velvet cloak is drawn The moon her secrets keeping Rest until the coming dawn......
Barbara Gorelick 9/28/12 "Wonder of Dusk" a Seguidilla contest.

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  1. Date: 10/9/2012 7:59:00 PM

    beautiful poem, I really enjoyed this lulling poem. Thank you for sharing. Lee

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 12:22:00 PM

    Congrats on your win Barbara.Beautiful verse.

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 9:40:00 AM

    Beautiful write. I love the wording. Congratulations on your win! Thank you for stopping by!

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 5:24:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Wonder of Dusk in Sequidilla"contest Barbara. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 12:53:00 PM

    lovely indeed, Barbara - especially love the last line. Congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 12:29:00 PM

    Ahhh!!Romantic and exquisite beautiful contest entry..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for your presence at my work..Sara

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 12:10:00 PM

    Love this one, dear Barbara! Much luck... hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 6:34:00 AM

    Beautiful images... good luck in the contest... Terry

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 3:57:00 PM

    this creates a lovely and very dusk-like mood. nice one!

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 3:46:00 PM

    "Dusk a gentle sigh".... Beautifully said, Barbara. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 3:21:00 PM

    Love this Barbara. Should do very well in Nette's contest luv. Love, Gail