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You, My Love

You smell like the earth after a thunderstorm, like peat moss and rusty spades, like smoke rings from a pine forest, sweet tobacco drying in the attic -- You taste like almonds sprinkled with a touch of sage, roasted pumpkin seeds -- You sound like the cry of the peacock that shouts green for blue as the warmth of the sun touches the frosty savannah -- You pulsate my footsteps like the mighty eagle, folding, unfolding your wings along the veins of a desolate uphill path -- You are the Baobab that grows where the ground becomes even and all that is left, is to love.
* I wrote this on your birthday...thank you for all the beautiful gifts you have given me...I will love you forever.

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  1. Date: 1/2/2013 4:20:00 PM

    It truly is a masterpiece. Frank mentioned this poem to me... I'm glad he did, I'm in awe. Just beautiful and such a gift to your love!

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 12:45:00 AM

    TOO BEAUTIFUL FOR WORDS....(strange thing for this aspiring poet to say...eh?) And to use this masterpiece to express your love? UMM! So Delicious! What a beautiful Gift you are!!! And I can't think of anyone ....who'd have the presence of mind...more than Chris...who'd savor this... with all his heart... and brilliant mind.

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 12:16:00 PM

    A sensitive look at love. Like this alot.

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 12:10:00 AM

    This poem read like a gift the very first time that I read it. I will always love you, and be appreciative of the gifts that you offer back to me in return(come to think of it, I am not sure who started it all? Seems simultaneous :D).