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RED

An apple red as blood
Hear you go dear 
Take it with cheer 
It's sweet as sweet can be 

If only you would runaway 
Or something like that
My mirror just won't let me be
As I look into it, it keeps reminding me 

Alas, I'm not the fairest of them all  
That makes my blood boil as I walk past 

My husband says, Oh my beauty she is a child
I say, yes, she is a coming of age child 
And she is your child at that 
There can only be one queen of this manor 

I will send my huntsman to retrieve her heart
Then maybe this thorn in my side will subside
She will be gone once and for all from my site

Or maybe the huntsman will be her prince charming
And they will ride off together, never to be seen again

So here my child take this apple and eat
This blood red apple is calling to you 
And be on your way for good this day
I should never want to see you again  


 9/ 19/ 2012   9pm  Sunday
I wrote it as I was watching the add for snow white & the huntsman with Charlize Theron,,, she is a favorite actress of mine ;}

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  1. Date: 4/28/2013 9:06:00 PM

    Rereading this COOL poem of yours I liked so much from before.

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 9:38:00 PM

    Wonderful take on a classic, I loved it, very creative, keep it up

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 2:28:00 PM

    oh dear the huntsman sneered, a little good ill do, a bit of meat from the forest neat, will fool ole queenie too

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 7:38:00 PM

    Awesome write Debbie! Haven't seen this movie but enjoyed watching her in Sweet November...powerful movie!

    Macfarlane Avatar Cecilia Macfarlane Date: 12/17/2012 7:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! Hugs
  1. Date: 11/19/2012 7:02:00 PM

    Vanity--it seems can lead to some incredible adventures. Mirror mirror on the wall / who's insanest of them all? / Nasty, mean, from Islam / said the glass 'tis Saddam. / Appalled Bush bawled, "Bastard you'll fall." So--you chose to write about something quite important. Your sense of direction must be really good. Certainly appreciated here. I am impressed. Also, you have good taste in actresses!

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 5:19:00 PM

    Debbie, I would like to see the haiku you mentioned during the comment you left my haiku... xox~pd

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 4:48:00 AM

    Wow Debbie, glad i've seen this wonderful poem... i believe the movie should be made from this poem, you are indeed a star.....

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 2:17:00 AM

    Hi Debbie great write, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 5:14:00 PM

    Ahh snow white endlessly facinating! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 12:46:00 PM

    Yes! "Now! Take a bite!" This is one of my favorite images - that old hag witch encouraging Snow White. Enjoyed your poem's presenting the other side of the coin. LOve, daver

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 2:26:00 PM

    This is a very good poem. This is as red as it gets. i saw Snow White a few times. I never forget the red apple. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 11:41:00 PM

    Best to keep your heart young lest your beauty steals the breath from your wisdom Debbie - a great display of emotion contesting with values - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 12:38:00 PM

    clever write, Debbie - I haven't seen the film yet, but I loved the Snow White story as a boy

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 6:14:00 AM

    nicely written....enjoyed..

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 12:06:00 AM

    Now that I have read your poem, I will have to check out that flick. I liked Charlize in "That Thing You Do". She only played a small part in that film. Despite a few typos present, this is a good write.

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 4:44:00 PM

    I miss wisteria lane or maybe it's Terry Hatcher. :) Quite a vent of torrent emotion here. Have a blessed day. :) Forgive me for using your moniker, but it seems apropriate when communicating with you. Soooo. Have a blessed night too. :)

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 7:50:00 AM

    awesome!!! I loved that movie, and also , are you watching ONce Upon a TIme Sunday nights. If not, you better start!! I know you will just love it.

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 7:09:00 AM

    enjoyed, Debbie, thanks for stopping by...jimbo

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 7:59:00 PM

    very dramatic! well done. warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 1:27:00 PM

    a fairy tale from a different perspective indeed! Thanks for your comment on Blood on the Ballot. Whether or not there are many homeless children in the world is no excuse to kill the innocent ones coming into it. There are other alternatives to the barbaric scenario the world chooses today. perhaps some day we as a people will become civilized. One can only hope. Thanks again, Debbie.I liked your take on the fairy tale.

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 11:52:00 AM

    you know, i, the talking snake, gave the same temptation to adam and eve....can ya dig it? i enjoyed reading this through blue eyes....PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~ and charleze in MONSTER was great but the real talent was the make-up person who took beauty and made it look ferocous...and in DEVIL'S ADVOCATE she was beyond great...as is this poem...yours until chicken little's premonition comes true PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 4:17:00 PM

    Glad that you explained..Good work that advertizes for the movie...Glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by.Sara

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 2:05:00 PM

    Charlize is an amazingly beautiful woman! Don't care if she can act or not... just want to sit there all google-eyed drinking in her unbelievable beauty! LOL Love and hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 1:58:00 PM

    Always keep a little bit of "child" in your memory. Love it Debbie. Have a lovely weekend. - Love oxox Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 10:30:00 PM

    Debbie, i love that movie...I'm a sucker when it comes to fairy-tales tales... especially twisted ones... And Charlize, is one of my top actresses... I give her two thumbs up on the wicked queen role. You know after watching her in the Movie "MONSTER" I knew she would rock the evil crude acting in her performance. I was happy to see it when the movie first came out.. love your poem,, very vivid... xox~pd

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 7:29:00 PM

    What a brilliant write you have written here Debbie! I really enjoyed this poem, very charming! I have watched some of the show 'once upon a time', which involved snow white and the evil queen, but never have I seen the movie 'snow white & the huntsman'! But please, let me know if it's a good movie...I haven't seen anything on this movie! Anyway, this is a wonderful poem, Great Work!!