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Below is the poem entitled dream which was written by poet Joni Havard. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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dream

embraced by smiles
but, swollowed by tears
i tried to stay strong but, the weight of the world has finally deafeted me
i have transformed my dreams into realistic actions
which is not my defenition of sucess by far
but it is the way the world has defined it for u and for me 
it has told us not to dream, but to focus
but why dont they just tell us to focus on our dreams?

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  1. Date: 10/12/2012 4:26:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

    Havard Avatar Joni Havard
    Date: 10/14/2012 5:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks bunches sara(:
  1. Date: 10/12/2012 9:43:00 AM
    @carol brown hi im new to poetry soup and what does the term HM mean?

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 11:55:00 AM
    Congratulations on your H M in my "Life These Days" (Bio Form)contest Joni. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 9:21:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Joni. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 4:45:00 AM
    I like this! What you are describing is a notion that many never get. Takes guts to make dreams come true. It's not the ONLY definition of success, but it's certainly one of them! There are a few spelling errors, but nothing crazy:) Keep it coming!

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 6:20:00 PM
    Wow...huge picture you've painted. I like this a lot!