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Noise

black noise;
treacle noise;
black noise circles my head;
black-like noise.
I hate-
it.

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  1. Date: 10/22/2012 8:51:00 PM

    Thanks for commenting on "You". Elizabeth is so eloquent and inspiring isn't she? The comments on her poem "You" alluded to mother/child. I had no idea but was struck with the viewpoint of a child newborn. I shared it with her first and was honored when she suggested I post it. I read all your posted poems tonight and immediately sense that you have said more in just a few poems than I have said in hundreds.