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A state of mind

     If only I could change the state of mind with which I'm always in
     Feeling hazy , my body aching I find, it's getting under my skin
     If I could change my thought process anything to be mind free
     You know the sort yeah nolonger feeling depressed just happy

    I need a new thought pattern, as I'm just going round in a circule
    Always at nort is what seems to happen, it's like an endless cycal
    And depression,it's like I against I, another verse, another episode 
    Always a question and no answer why?, I'm like in reverse mode
    
    My head goe's round and round, it's like this machanical whirlpool
   That said it's now starting to pound, all these thoughts so perpetual
  Delving into the deepist corners of my mind, a place of femiler teretory
   And it's there you know that I find, I'd love to erase every bad memorie

    Back and fourth, it's always felt like this,like being in a profound dream
    Still I need a metamorphosis, some higher ground,or change of sence
    I'm so tierd of feeling blue, and having to hide behind a constant grin
    If one only knew, being in this state of mind really makes my head spin
 
                         WRITTEN BY MYSELF DAVID SCOTT(2004)
                            Inspierd by look backs and conversations(2000)
                 A STATE OF MIND A FOLLOW UP TO A STASTE OF CONFUSION
                            something Im always asking myself if I did not have
                                     the negitive bastard who ives in my hea

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  1. Date: 10/1/2012 12:44:00 AM

    I tend to feel myself in this state of mind as well. I can really relate to this poem; not only are you relatable(I dont believe thats a word but oh well!), but your verse was well written and flowed well. Awesome work! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 7:26:00 PM

    Oh, an awesome write my friend which I have enjoyed sharing it with me this morning. Thank you so much for reading it and your wonderful comments on my poems. Have a nice and wonderful day always! hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 7:04:00 PM

    they say we are our own worst enemy. I have found it to be true. Change the things you say to yourself. Do it on purpose. be nice and kind and loving to YOU, then your world will change. hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 2:58:00 PM

    awww You are right, this is kind of similar to my introspective one. Wow ~ But this is very descriptive and powerful. I really like this, and thank you for your comments on mine, I appreciate it very much. hugs ~ Rebecca