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Who Is Correct

Who is Correct? “I am”, he said, with his silly head, which looked like a crumpet instead. Then he spoke from his arse which may be a farce but who said that blue was not red? The trickster then threw out the air, which, most would agree is unfair; and trotted in with an answer on a pony named dancer declaring: “why on earth should I care”? So, speaking of relevant things - those things that tug at your strings - do you know where you’re at when you put on your hat and vote for leaders and kings? Remember, whatever you do, it is always, all about you. So put your card in the box that is covered with locks and simmer along with the stew. Schemes and quarrels and plans on how to govern the lands, by making might right - in spite of our plight - is like walking on dangerous sands. “Who’s right?” you may say with finesse. “I am! And it’s a very big mess!” “Fix it for free, for it’s all about me! And I’m suffering, in awful distress.” Hey! Why don’t we roll up our sleeves, and hustle to bring in the sheaves? And stop playing “it’s awful” or, “hey, that’s unlawful!” And just work together? Oh please?

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 7:57:00 AM

    This poem is genius it is often difficult to find the modern poem that can bring rhyme and morale to the higher plateau. It is poetry like this which inspires me to pick up my quill again after many years of retirement that poetry like this caused me to go into. I could go on with appraisal for this piece about things like how the characterizations are so reflective of the illogicalness of many arguers . Thank you for sharing this brilliance

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 4:51:00 PM

    Sounds like you might have chased the white rabbit down the hole and were amidst the rantings and ravings of the Queen of Hearts! Oh, or were you just commenting on our government? Either way, I understand!! Enjoyable.

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 8:05:00 AM

    "Then he spoke from his arse" hey you got by the censors with "arse" LOL Great stuff John... cheers!

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 11:48:00 PM

    Hi John...Love the complexity of this limerick and the ideas portrayed! I completely agree with this huge question u pose! Superb work! gwendolen

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 2:13:00 PM

    Great job... You left a big word in my poem comments... Had to use a dictionary. OUCH...LOL

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 5:26:00 AM

    Yes, teamwork in any country can help that country to do more and be more..I feel that America needs the correct leaders but how can we know if we don't really know the persons running true qualifications.Great work expessing some great ideas in a humorous way.Thanks for stopping by..My poem that you commented upon was written after I had another ambulance ride and ER moment.It started off since it is hunting season here and the ER moment.Orginally I was using those two items and a contest..Sara

    Kendrick Avatar Sara Kendrick Date: 10/14/2012 5:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    John, Thank you for taking time to read so many of my works at one reading..When I saw your name, I thought about Virginia Wolf for I had just seen a movie on TV called Mrs. Galloway..Sara
  1. Date: 9/25/2012 12:44:00 PM

    I do believe you are correct! More hidden wisdom..Ha,ha. Great write!

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 6:12:00 PM

    Delightful! Super lim... Terry