Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
Pinterest button
Comments Inbox

 
About This Poem

your hypnotic eyes

In the sky I saw your face
In my mind I reached out to touch it
But when I opened my eyes
My hand was so far away from you
your smiled,and your face, faded,
and I smiled.
Closed my eyes once more,
to see your hypnotic eyes 
drew portrait of you,
in a breath
and felt the breeze brush over me
again and again.

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 11/21/2012 10:18:00 PM

    IVY,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 12:38:00 PM

    That is beautiful! :o) I smiled...

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 1:24:00 PM

    Ahhh..So romantic but yet sad..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Sara