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Night Dreams

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Night Dreams

 The bright blue diamond eyes shone
 Around the heart, gold, he spun
 A image from the distant place
 Where sun and moon exist
Only amongst the stars you find
A species of a different kind

Once thought to be alone
He somehow found a new home
A image from the distant place
where sun and moon exist
He appeared inside the dream
Not what was expected so it seems.

He was the vision inside my head
Came to me every night in my bed
A image from the distant place
where sun and moon exist
A place where dream unfold
With many stories to be told.



24/9/12

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  1. Date: 9/26/2012 9:01:00 AM
    Milky way to be precise, that's the dream of every godly writer, that colourful place........ Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 6:46:00 AM
    very visionary....I like it. How are you and your sweet grand baby?

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 9:58:00 PM
    hey, this says free verse, but there seems to be some kind of unique pattern to it where you are switching lines in the stanzas. It's very interesting how you did that. Great effect. for the dream contest??

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 3:28:00 PM
    What we don't dream? aye? Hope you're well and happy! Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 12:37:00 PM
    A dreamy poem Phyllis!Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 12:00:00 PM
    Should sometimes wish that good dreams could come true.- Beautiful poem Phyllis. - Have a nice afternoon. xoxo love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 10:13:00 AM
    Dear Phyllis, i love the way you describe the perfect world in a dream... always~ pd