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Dreamy Wedding

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Dreamy Wedding

The wedding bells were in full swing, ringing
The choir in the church was melodiously singing
The groom saw the bride entering with a smile
It took his heartbeat, breath away for a while

He couldn’t wait to make her his wife
He’d imagined with her, his entire life
But before he could face her, came in her brother
He asked in an angry tone “How much do you love her?”

“As much as the sky spreads” he answered, it was true
“Okay then you can marry her” the brother said, “that’s cool”
The bride was now a step ahead, the groom’s heartbeat fast
Before he could see her properly, came before him a task

The mother it was this time, asking him to propose
“Very romantic it should be, else, I’ll oppose”
The groom sat on his knees and said “I love you sweetheart”
“I cannot live even for a sec, even with the thought that we part”

The mother was satisfied, the bride came further
With her next step, the groom faced her father
“You can marry her only on one condition
Give her everything she wishes for, you love should have no limitation”

“Sure” the groom said, and his bride was now before him
But before the priest could start, a lady entered in
“Stop this marriage! I still love you” she said loudly
“Tell me you still love me, don’t marry, and say it proudly”

The bride was surprised, her eyes filled with tears and worry
Just then the lady said, “Oops the wrong marriage, I’m sorry!”
The couple was now happy and they finally got their ceremony right
The groom’s face was lit up and the bride’s was bright

Just then someone called the groom, “Get up son! It’s your wedding today!”
It was then that he realized, it was a dream! But he was sure today was the best day of his life!!

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written on 23rd Sep 2012
Written for the contest

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  1. Date: 3/26/2013 8:46:00 PM
    Dear Apoorva, Congratulations on YOUR Winning POEM "Dreamy Wedding" in the Contest "One of YOUR Greatest days" Sponsored by Dan Kearley. Superb Verse. To bad it was only a Dream. I would have LOVED to have had such a Wedding. I see Congratulations also for YOUR Win in "My Cousin's Wedding" Sponsored by Joanne. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 10:26:00 PM
    Hi Apoorva, stopping by to read this poem again, your poem is just beautiful, what a lovely way and day! Congratulations with your amazing poem, always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 2:30:00 PM
    Apoorva, Congratulations with your fantastic entry for Joann's "My Cousin's Wedding" cheers~ xox~ PD

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 8:37:00 AM
    Wow! this is really awesome! I've enjoyed reading it tonight. MY HUGE CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN, TOO MY DEAR APOORVA! thanks for sharing and also your congratulatory comments on my work. Have a lovely time/day always! hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 3:20:00 AM
    Smart and very witty, apoorva. Many congratulations on an awesome win with this wonderful poem!!

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 2:55:00 PM
    Oh, it's one of those dream sequences!! Clever one and I really enjoyed the read. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 7:13:00 AM
    What a super win for you. Congratulations Apoorva. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 11:51:00 AM
    Congratulations my friend for being a winner!! Your poem is beautiful indeed!! (^_^)

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 11:13:00 AM
    Nice take apoorva and big congratulations on your win xx

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 10:25:00 AM
    Nice twist in the tail of the tale. :-) Congratulations on your win, Apoorva. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 6:40:00 AM
    that would be a tough day....though maybe these things should be asked before the ceremony!?

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    Date: 9/25/2012 7:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yea but it ws just a dream!
  1. Date: 9/23/2012 10:36:00 PM
    Apoorva, awee... some dream... why do all good dreams have to be ruin... LOL.. I never had a dream of marriage.. but, I know the feeling of waking up and realizing it was only a dream... xox~pd

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 8:26:00 PM
    A lovely surprising twist in your last verse but a very interesting read. This poem is authentic and keeps the reader in his tips and toes. A delightful piece of art, lovely rhymes and rythym. My hat it off to you dear one.

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 2:03:00 PM
    you had me all the way....good luck in the contest...hugs

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 12:55:00 PM
    Interesting story told..Enjoy surprise to keep one reading..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by..I got Princess to take her pill..I wrote a blog about it..Sara

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 8:46:00 AM
    *.* I'm Listening Unto Jake Johnson Right Now, & Really Like The Laid Back Cruise Ride Amid His Music, My Dear Sweet Beautiful Apoorva ˜ After Viewing This Pleasant, Lovely & Humorous Creation I Imagine That It Might Be One Of Jake's Songs I'd Be Humming In My Mind As All Of These Acts Of Customs Perhaps Were Occurring ˜ Who Love's You Baby &, You May Now Kiss The Bride ˜ Smile, Where Can I Put My Gum ? Haha & Thank You For Your Beauty's Sweet Visit ˜ My Love, Tristen *.*

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 8:30:00 AM
    wow a dynamic view of this wedding apoorva .. a brilliant write and story too .. nicely rhymed luv .. winning wishes to u ..

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 8:03:00 AM
    What a nice dream to have on the wedding day! Jag

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 3:26:00 AM
    Enjoyed your wonderful poem, love Elizabeth

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 2:05:00 AM
    Excellent and meaningful write. Enjoyed. Tfs

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